Black Poetry : a pray of a fifteen year old girl

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  1. babimac13

    babimac13 Member MEMBER

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    needing the right motavation
    for some parents that seems like so much dedication

    the feeling of being alone
    like you want to be a house but you're only a home
    :?:
    you have have been by your self for all these years
    and cried a numerous amount of tears

    you have came to the point where you were so weak
    and when it came down to it you couldn't find the words to speak.....

    hard times that seem like you will never get far
    then you seem to fing a way by praying on a star......

    dear God please help me get though these times
    where it seems like me and my famly was getting by on dimes

    help us to get back into your will
    so no longer it shall be in brother's blood to kill

    bless my sister so her health will be restored
    and her pain will come no more

    my mother... you see her struggle from day to day
    just help her find another way

    my older sister just seem to find the light
    but by your will she will see that every thing will be alright

    help us find you again
    for the only thing that we need is you... the all might friend[/C
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Babimac 13...
    Hi and welcome,
    Beautiful heartfelt piece poet, God answer all prayers, all the time...keep the faith of a mustard seed.
     
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    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the house of peace & respect
    welcome to the family of love as i bless this piece

    tyte drop , surely it heard and thy father always answers
    flow head on babimac13
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    God always answers prayer, it may take some time, but he does hear your heartfelt prayer, and this felt like it was from your heart's core. Welcome to destee, make yourself at home.
     
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    Hi,welcome to destee......this was a nice prayer poet....things get better with time,just keep praying.....

    one love
     
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    babimac13 Member MEMBER

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    THANK YOU TO ALL THAT HAS REPLYED.... THE POERTY ON THIS SITE, FROM ALL THAT HAS WRITTEN HAS MOTIVATED ME TO DO SOMETHING POSTIVE WITH MY LIFE..... AND AS YOU ALL SAY GOD DOES ANSWER PRAYERS.
     
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    this was very touching piece. flow on poet from the ga peach Nevar!!!!!!!!!:hearts1:
     
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    We Love You Poet
    Once again Welcome to the Poetic Haven
    Much love Poet
     
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