Black Poetry : A Poet's Magic

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    A
    poet's
    magic
    in the finger
    the hand
    dat
    cross
    da mind
    where
    the vision
    takes
    the lone
    ride
    to emotions
    where
    birth is born
    poetically
    poetry
    sprayed
    words
    play within
    and send
    a
    message
    to the reader
    forth
    da feelings
    of
    magic
    is posed
    let not the pen run dry
    nor the picture painted
    forth insode is justice
    of a poet ....
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *sigh*rich

    rich,rich,rich,......*sigh*
    u done did it again,
    but cant we expect
    :hot: ...ish.. from u
    brutah?
    :D
     
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    A poets magic brings closure to ones mind! beautiful Rich!
     
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    This was :hot: Rich!!1 I love the way you portrayed this...:)
     
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    SwtT took my comment!!!! :cry:

    No, MASTER $$$RICH$$$ this was great I loved the way it flowed in my head as I read it!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the_story............thankz and yes look for the wave

    purplemoons ........yes ya right it brings a sweet taste thankz

    swtT...........happy u saw inside this flow and felt it thankz

    Alizentang.........as it flowed the mind of da reader feels
    the depth of it as u did ya one target thankz
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Light as air, as magic is" captivating, opening ur mind,
    floating down the page.....magic=quicker than the eye....
    Rich's poetry=pleasing to the mind...

    Magical flow,
    A
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow....absolutely beautiful:)
     
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    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Rich,

    This is a wonderful poem, Rich!! You certainly have been blessed with poetic magic!! Great flow!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    angelic............the moment of flow is magic u know
    da poet's pen scribe it again & again !

    LovelyG..............thanks sista u felt it the poet's pen ...

    sierra ..........now u know da magic of a poet is self pen to canvas

    Thanks every one
     
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