Black Poetry : A Poet's Fulfillment

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  1. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He said...
    he had this fantasy that just had to be fulfilled...
    It was urgent...
    (and with good reason; though, he didn't yet know it).
    He said...
    he wanted to... had to... make love to a 'poet'.
    He said...
    he wanted to... nibble on her lines,
    lick, suck, and hit her rhymes,
    and bring her to the ends of her stanzas,
    at least four...
    ...or five...
    ...or six...
    times,
    in high anthological volumes
    as repetitious as mid winter wind chimes;
    assuring satisfaction before...
    ...during...
    ...and after...
    each of his satisfactorily performed (pant)omimes.
    So -not that I'm a poet, or anything-
    I stepped up to the plate and let him
    'practice' -if I can call it that- on me.
    Sort of like a real life 'crash test dummy'
    (well... that's what friends are for).
    And, just for technique's sake,
    we taped ourselves...
    copulatorily cooperating,
    with one another's bodies
    and be(cum)ing one six -count 'em- six
    times in a row, in little rubber cuplets.
    And, not that I was enjoying it or anything
    but, my (orgas)mother's -almost never wrong- intuition
    had hardly predicted 'sex'tuplets... whew!
    Then suddenly, in the aftermath
    of his 'poetry in motion'
    a, most, satisfied me was struck, heavily,
    with the notion that this man had poetry
    seeping through his pores and...
    he could have made love...
    to himself... :D
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Maple Mami!

    You ova da edge baby gurl! You are one hell of a friend...lol I Love It!!!! I've been hit by your verbal stunna... left motionless, so I guess that means I have to read it again...lol

    It's Brill
    Holla at cha bwoy!
    Reas
     
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    Maple

    This is TOOOO TIGHT. :toast: Now that's feeling sum poetry. I enjoyed the read.

    Madd Sistahly Love
    CCBSKYN :heart: :)
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Maple.


    okay!! that's it... imma tell mama...

    you don stole one of my pieces!!! :lol:
    (not for real ya'll... i just wish i wrote it!)

    this was tyght-to-def sister dear!!
    i loved it... loved it... love-did it!!...
    do your thang... it's allll love! :)
    (besides... i'm ova here takin' notes)

    AlwaysLove.
    SunShyne~
     
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    i see...

    maple syrup be seeping all ova da playground...carefully extracted from natural crevices...a sistah dehydrated...causing little yeps from deep within...and body tremors, indicating the severity of the quakes resulting from the stimulation of those crevices.

    regain your composure, little sis...we're waiting for part two of this triple X series.:)

    beautifully scribed.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wooooweeee!!! mapleX

    dis **** be too tyght gurl ya off the hook and banggin':toast: :heart: :kiss:
     
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    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I Ain't Mad At Cha!

    This was tyte sistah! Whew, I think I'm gonna have to partake again...;)
     
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    whoa.
    whoa...

    i need 2 holla at this poet for tips...

    you did it once again with this maple xxtraction..

    nfinite
    jh.
     
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    excitingly hot

    This was so cute and danty....I enjoyed every line...
    i love it when poetry becomes syblime and sexy!
     
  10. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Extreme thanxs...

    ...to you all, my wonderful
    fellow scribes, for feelin' me
    on this one. Can you tell I
    let my imagination run away
    with me? :D

    Reas- Was it just as good for you yesterday? :D

    Coco- Double thanx for the toast, ma. There's just somethin' about a man's poetry, ya know? :)

    Big Sis- You know I love ya, right? You always supportin' me, and it's felt, believe it...:heart:

    Baller- Just outta curiosity, aren't you that man with the poetry 'seeping through his pores' :confused: ? ;)

    The Richne$$ himself I appreciate ya droppin' down low enough to check me out on this one. The love is there, pa...:D

    Danilyn- I'm pleased you felt this one enough to partake again. If I didn't know any better I'd think it was okay... *humbled*

    His most 'nfinite' one- I think you flipped it a little, because I believe he got his pointers from you, pa...:D

    Mr. Marion- Thank you for the read. You callin' my poem sexy? *Aw Shucks*
     
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