Black Poetry : A Poet's Death

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  1. nfinite

    nfinite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I develop myself through poetry
    through these rhymes i spit so poetically
    they're deadly
    but revive life in this body
    that's been hung out to dry
    I feel disconnected
    everytime my pens neglected
    and the inevitable beomes to much to bare
    and i sware when my pads empty
    simply i feel the same
    like a face with no name
    i remain incomplete until i take seat
    in the knowledge
    release my heart from bondage
    and think clearly
    cuz i nearly died dearly
    a poets death

    My soul plundered
    6 feet under
    and my ora separated
    but my words reparated the loses
    before the masses i showed my ***
    and realized just like glass
    i broke
    and when it soaked in
    like thieves poetry broke in
    and vandalized the place
    gave this name a face
    and muttered the words
    Lazareth
    and i rised 4rm the dead
    and feed my mind
    the food i needed to survive
    this poets death
    i revised
    this poets death
    i revised
    above the lies 4rm those who said she'll never make it
    who said no matter what it takes
    will break her
    until we fake her
    into believeing there is no 2nd birth
    but i evovled 4rm this earth
    to a higher being
    the being the beginning the ending
    of losing yet winning
    in a race to reach the finish line
    i'm a finish mine
    please believe i'm a finish mine
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello and welcome to the house of luv...
    wow didn't you come in with a bang! this was tight, just keep your pen alive. thanks for sharing this hope to read more.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte poetic drop
    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the family of love & bonding
    happy u here upon us to share in scribe
    welcomeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!
     
  4. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome! This is indeed a wonderful way to introduce yourself to us. Looking forward to seeing more of your scribes.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Down but not out, sounds like this poet was revived. Liked the way you flowed with this, welcome to destee!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    uppin dis to let the emotions flow again
     
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