Black Poetry : A Poet's Death Part 2- The long awaited

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  1. nfinite

    nfinite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I really preciate da luv fam, here goes...

    My soul plundered
    6 feet under
    and my ora separated
    but my words reparated
    the loses
    before the masses
    i showed my ***
    and realized
    just like glass i broke
    and when it soaked in
    like thieves poetry broke in
    and vandalized the place
    gave this name a face
    and muttered the words
    Lazerith
    and I rised
    and fed my mind the food
    i needed to survive
    this poet's death i revise
    this poet's death i revise
    above the lies from those who sd she'll never make it
    who sd no matter what it takes
    we'll break her
    until we fake her
    into believing that there is no 2nd birth
    but I evolved from this earth
    to a higher being
    the being
    the beginning
    the end of losing
    yet winning
    in a race to reach the finish line
    I'ma finish mine
    please believe
    I'ma finish mine

    Awhile back my car was stolen, and inside all my earlier work and treasured thoughts. I can't describe how hurt I was and still am, not about the car but my poetry, some verses, and books. I thought there was not point to continue, i.e. my death, but a starving poet dropped a little encouragement in my ear and this is the 1st piece I wrote following that drama, that's why it is so close to my heart. How can I use the spoken word forum so you'll could here this piece?
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love the way you are dealing with the real issue of your loss. Speak on it tonight in spoken word, allowing the family to take in every dimension of your vibe. It's a win-win situation every Friday night that Premium Members enjoy. I look forward to seeing your name in lights! :hi:
     
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    nice flow and touching story
    that's always a poets biggest fear
    and biggest nightmare...I'm so sorry
    for your loss... :(
    but yes...you will evolve again
    and as with most painful experiences
    a poets pen suddenly becomes
    more fiery than before...
    it's obvious you have the heart
    to arise again...scathed but greater!

    Tell your story poet!
    peace&luv
    Sage
     
  4. nfinite

    nfinite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can't Express

    The words. Thankx so much for the luv, but most defiantly the message. You understood the situation, the feeling, and the growth. A true life process.
     
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    Alpha Male Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    RE TO nfinite

    Somethings you lose you can replace
    If you have creative force its a well
    thank yoou for being you


    God gives eternal life in his son
    Jesus Christ
    BELIEVE
     
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