Black Poetry : A Poet's Death Part 1-The Transition Album

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by nfinite, Apr 21, 2005.

  1. nfinite

    nfinite Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 22, 2004
    Messages:
    61
    Likes Received:
    1
    Ratings:
    +1
    Hey fam! This piece is very close to my heart, tell me what you think cuz it might be on my new album.

    I develop myself thru poetry
    thru the rhymes i spit so poetically
    they're deadly
    but revive live in this body
    thats been hung out to dry
    i feel
    disconnected
    every time my pens neglected
    and inevitable becames to much to bare
    and i swear
    when my pads empty
    simply
    i feel the same
    like a face with no name
    i remain incomplete
    until i take seat in the knowledge
    release my heart from this bondage
    and think clearly
    cuz i nearly
    died dearly
    a poet's death....
     
  2. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Jul 2, 2003
    Messages:
    4,912
    Likes Received:
    613
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    (RF) Technician
    Location:
    ( Alonewolf ) California.. by way of the LOU
    Ratings:
    +795
    Very Nice Nfinite

    This :spinstar: flow :spinstar: tells
    of how a poet needs release
    and how those thoughts
    make simple come alive.
    Continue to connect and share.

    :great:
     
  3. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Jan 14, 2003
    Messages:
    6,642
    Likes Received:
    539
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    Poet
    Location:
    The Lone-Star State
    Ratings:
    +604
    Clearly, a poet's death is one to be mourned.
     
  4. AHMOSE

    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Feb 6, 2005
    Messages:
    877
    Likes Received:
    9
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    Mechanical Engineer
    Location:
    Educating the Diaspora
    Ratings:
    +9
    When a poet dies the world cries
    never again to blessed by his
    Pens suprise!

    Thanks for sharing Im looking forward to the second part in this series.
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Oct 4, 2003
    Messages:
    16,340
    Likes Received:
    114
    Location:
    Northeast
    Ratings:
    +122
    You expressed so well that feeling one gets when a writer wants to write but somehow can't. I hear ya poet, flow on.
     
  6. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jan 24, 2004
    Messages:
    7,007
    Likes Received:
    160
    Occupation:
    day care provider (own business)
    Location:
    Brick City
    Ratings:
    +161
    I have died a thousand deaths...without my pen. Wow that's what a poet feel indeed, wonderful piece poet, I like your style.
     
  7. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,977
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,177
    poeticly sprayed
    death of a poet
    leaves the ink dry
    and hearts wet in tears
    u took it there pt.2 please!!!!!!!!!
     
  8. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    May 5, 2003
    Messages:
    4,020
    Likes Received:
    32
    Occupation:
    strength coach
    Location:
    Seattle, WA
    Ratings:
    +32
    Def put it on the album, baby. This one is hot.
     
Loading...
Similar Threads - Poet's Death Part
  1. nfinite
    Replies:
    4
    Views:
    630
  2. nfinite
    Replies:
    5
    Views:
    676
  3. 1poetsought
    Replies:
    2
    Views:
    356
  4. $$RICH$$
    Replies:
    4
    Views:
    829
  5. twision
    Replies:
    7
    Views:
    1,254