Black Poetry : A Poetic Ride.....Vision

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Come take a ride
    ...............With me
    Across.....


    Egyptian sand
    For it covers my soul as you take me
    We reflect like diamonds in the rough
    Baby come, close be real and hold me tight
    Turn the sun into the moon
    And take me in…

    Its time to be true stop playing it safe
    In vision……African sand blows
    Across…….Blue-sky we fly
    For White-sands we lay
    Purple-passion we be
    Take and feed my soul
    Upon the light…Two diamonds intertwine
    Like a dream come true I wish for you
    As my heart use to be blue
    And you open my heart to a brand new start
    I will never let anyone take you away
    There for all your needs
    For I am your strength
    Cascading falls of sweet love
    As the earth shifts
    Release our powers…As a mystical magical hush
    Carries through the wind
    Our essence flows in the air

    Come take a ride
    ...............With me
    Across......


    Egyptian sand
    For it covers my soul as you take me
    We reflect like diamonds in the rough
    Baby come, close be real and hold me tight
    Turn the sun into the moon
    And take me in…

    (C) 2004
    Poetry by an Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Those Nubian images...this was just pretty. A serene flow.
     
  3. PurpleMoons

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    Very beautiful!!!

    It has a soothing
    calm vibe!!!!!!



    This part was the most vivid
    to me! You have captured
    the hearts song!!!!!

    Lovely scribing!!!!!!
     
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    Re: Poetic Ride

    This poem is very beautiful.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was tyte had me on a maze
    cascading deep in da pools of
    steamy vision love da flow sis..
    dis was a sweet
    Egyptain maze or should i say a
    vision of Egyptain luv da ride was
    sweet and fulfilling
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$...:D...wow thank you for the love..glad it took ya deep with in the
    Egyptain maze!!!!!:kiss: guess i did my job on takin ya on a ride...:)

    Poetrymama...thank you for the love !!!!

    PurpleMoons...sis thank you happy you enjoyed...loving ya support and love given to my work..thanks..:grouphug:

    watzinaname..yes indeed..thanks for the loving support sis!!!

    Peace :wave:
    thank yall
    Angel
     
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    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the words gave a sense of serenity and happiness
    very peaceful and tranquil
    i love this poem
    keep the flow goin poet
     
  8. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MBA,

    This was soooo pretty. I could see the beauty of the sand mounds, the blue sky, everything. Beautiful flow.
     
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    Great imagery!
    poetry never seems
    to be complete without it
    feeling the flow Sister!
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Prizefighter16..thanks for the love on dis.... :D

    jazzymoonchild..thanks glad you enjoyed!!!!

    angelicsage..hey my sister!!! glad you feeling the flow..thanks!!!! :coffee:

    Peace
    Angel
     
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