Black Poetry : a poem

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  1. luvlee1

    luvlee1 New Member MEMBER

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    i held him orificially until he cried rivers into my hair
    and left me never to return again

    i coerced spasms from so deep within another that
    he became suspicious of my orificial expertise and married another woman

    i loved him so, orificially, that he told me he couldn't see me anymore
    i was making him weak
    not a man

    i put all of my love into him orificially
    kneading love knots with adept fingers
    and kisses that pleaded
    begged for love
    to cum forth with a force that he had never known before
    and he called me a whore

    i listened to his promises of forever
    as i undulated mercilessly
    over him
    not in control
    having full control
    turning seconds into minutes into eternity
    and i left him with smeared mascara from my own tears
    he called again and again
    i never answered

    his eyes are closed tight
    or they are transfixed on me in lust maquerading occasionally as love

    he strokes my hair, shoulders, back, thighs
    he pulls my hair as if i am a dumb deaf mute emotionless sex doll

    sometimes it feels like rape
    sometimes it feels like love

    i never cum
    orificially
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow !!!!!
    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the family of peace & respect
    welcome from above as i bless this some love

    This river smooth and deep yes leave a desired void
    again welcome to the house of Destee's .....luvlee1.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    flippin this one back up !!!!
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow welcome
    To the Poetc Haven
    Feel comfortable for real
    Deep and lovely poet
    Welcome again
     
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    Welcome to the family..
    Nice piece....
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What parades around as love can be so many other things. Welcome to Destee, do flow some more.
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was some hot s**t!!!
    Welcome to the fam and everything
     
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    Ms_MochaB Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OK LUVLEE, U DID THAT THANG SIS
    WELCOME TO THE FAMILY
     
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    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW

    this makes my heart pound...

    phenom of a writer...
    excellent scribe...

    Wow - like hellaciously good.
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow is what you left me flow on poet.:kiss1:
     
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