Black Poetry : A Poem...yeah

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  1. NDeep

    NDeep Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A poem....yeah a poem
    A poem filled with intellectual, hypothetical Caddy's in space and
    Folk's universes, and other's burdens
    Mixed emotions and angles crying
    Tears and pain; lost lives and saved souls
    Oh ****, their I go, rambling on about things I have no control
    Things that have past. Things that have come and gone.

    A poem...I mean
    A poem filled to the brim with "I love you's and I hate you's"
    What does it all mean?
    Does it mean that I can still dream of hypothetical, imaginary things?
    Or does it mean that my blue clicky-click pen must strike the paper at stratigical and logical points to create a visual image of the things flowing through my head at astronomical miles per hour.

    Who knows? Who cares? It's a poem
    It's where I let go of my rain
    And spill my emotions and take out my pain
    And create textures in black; click-clack and quak-quak
    And share my world with others like me who have a poets mind
    Who can't help that their pen records the literature of their minds

    This is....a poem....
    It's all mine.....
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    can't be mad at the poet's expression
    of their thoughts and feelings.
    that's what we're here for... I'm pretty sure.
    Peace to ya!
     
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    express self so openly
    poetry is the key
    indeed ya poem
     
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