Black Poetry : A poem I heard in a dream

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  1. twistnwords

    twistnwords New Member MEMBER

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    A poem only heard in a dream.





    Unconscious, you are so far deep in your sleep

    as you dream,

    dream hard on the words in tonight's piece

    perform by me

    you toss and moan and mimic the lines you love the best

    you go from side to side and front to back

    and you arise with your mountains peaks fully erect

    What was it that did it for you,

    why tonight of all nights you reconstructed a poem

    that I have never written or perform for you

    at the edge of your parting mouth receiving my bliss

    the mist from your breath releases like ahhhhs

    you have me there but its only air you kiss

    holding your warm spot

    in the middle of sheets

    your hands goes from over head,

    to brushing your chest

    then disappear between closed legs

    to underground fountains,

    while heated body still whispering for me

    You bring yourself to boiling points

    you take me where you want me

    with spreading and stretching and cracking

    to locking joints

    Don't hold back on the imagination

    continue to produce these words and phrases

    to your poem is no more

    why fight the heights of screaming delights

    where the very insides come to articulated roar

    Calm down love,

    I'm the spirit you called on

    to recite for you

    to perform a poem that you can only

    hear in your dreams

    no rubbing between your legs and making wishes

    for images of bodily figures and destinations

    to come true

    relax a little,

    let the candles burn in scented light

    I'm giving you what you asked

    don't let these words ever pass

    each line is a touch



    you continue the dream until I am your hold

    the gripping to your last clutch

    Perform for me you ask while sheets

    fall off to fighting arousings

    you happily anticipating my next lines

    spreading yourself across & spreading legs

    cocked open wide

    You say come inside,

    so I only enter you with worlds that will stimulate

    your thought patterns and make you go into a form

    of shock treatments that allow my penetrations

    to be only word related

    Frustrated

    you call on your makers and use words that are not

    quite excepted

    you demonstrate your ability to do art in agilities

    with just the body you were blessed with

    I'm your lyrical gift of poetic entity

    from my first line like foreplay

    my last drop is your subtle release

    There no time in one earth life time to

    count backwards the constant releases in

    one night.

    You asked for this, but only in your dreams

    when you awaken, there is no longer me

    a bed full of cream

    and daylight that takes all day to bring darkness to rise

    cause having a dream is nice

    remembering a dream is lovely

    but coming out the dream is unjust!





    DREAM ON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


    LJG
    aka
    TTNU
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And what a lucid dream it was, with vivid words caressing our minds with passion. Enjoyed the detail of your write, poet.
    Welcome back to Destee.com. Familiarize yourself with our poetic rules of etiquette, http://destee.com/forums/showthread.php?t=11896 . Give poetic love and support to other poets, as they give the same to you. Looking forward to reading more from you. :)
     
  3. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yes real live

    when it's a nice dream and not a nightmare

    that helps

    a spiritual feel of a dream

    nice work poet

    nice work
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome within this piece had me right in da mix
     
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