Black Poetry : A Poem From the Morality of Ahirman Collection

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  1. MANASIAC

    MANASIAC Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Love at First Sight my Last Fight"
    A Poem from the Morality of the Ahirman
    Written by Manasiac
    Inspired by Tupac Amaru Shakur's Hit Em Up


    She was 6 foot Tall
    About size 6
    It was love at first sight
    Skinny legs and all

    I was in love at first sight
    I was her nurturer and her listener
    I caressed her soul
    I helped her accomplish her goals

    Marriage was on our minds
    She wanted to have 2 kids from me
    Zaire and Malachi would be their names
    And we be happily married until the end of time

    But then reality set in

    Because I was telling her I loved her
    From another woman's bed I slept in

    She said she felt raped and robbed
    She said had a dream about my blood being stained on her shirt
    I politely told her

    You might find yourself in the ocean
    But it's cool though
    You know dead women getter better promotion

    My Love at First Sight was my Last Fight

    She say she hate my soul
    But yet she loves it when we roll

    She finally realized that her love could not change me

    One woman in my life and my arms is something that I refuse to hold

    Love at First Sight my Last Sight
     
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    I liked this piece a lot keep it up :shades:
     
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    she was da divine rapture to ya sight
    tyte flow i was in a mental vision of this
     
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    this was tight
     
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    hay mani.....i liked this one...
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    -story
     
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