Quiet Poetry Lounge : A POEM FOR STEPHEN PT. III

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  1. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My dearest son my one and only the beat to my heart is what you are

    As tears begin to well I really do not know where to start

    So let me just say…..how much I truely love you

    And although at first I did not know how to receive your lastest news

    Things are so much clearer to me now that my eyes and heart

    Where given the opportunity to see how much she loves you

    I also know that you love her dearly too

    You see son, you are MY baby

    Not use to hearing another woman say those words

    And be speaking to you ….and although I knew one day you would meet

    A woman that would nest inside your heart

    I guess I was expecting some kind of warning

    To prepare me for that day, you kept tryn to tell me

    I fought it in every way

    But I really should have known better and took you more seriously

    Because there is one thing I know about you

    Not Just any little chick will do I know there have been many

    But I have only met 2

    that tells me something about you

    You don’t bring just anything home to mama

    That was my 1st confirmation that she was very special to you

    I’ve had sometime to meditate, process it and think it through

    No longer am I feeling abandon like someone stole my joy

    I know you are a grown man now, no longer my little boy

    To tell you the truth son, I am very happy for you

    You have matured so much in so many ways

    your priorities are different now from past days

    I know you think I have not noticed it but I have

    And I am proud of you

    She is such a sweet young woman and an awesome mother too

    My heart is at peace now that I know

    She will be a wonderful mother to your child too

    I really don’t appreciate you making me

    A grandmother so soon, and if you ever call me that

    You will have flash backs of when you where in school

    And the teacher would call me sayn’ you done

    something you wasn’t suppose to

    Don’t act you don’t remember…..(smile)

    Seriously my son I am pleased that you have managed to do

    What so many men wish and dream about

    even men much older than you

    find a woman that truely loves you for you

    I wish the both of you much happiness in everything you decide to do

    And yes I will be spoiling the baby rotten

    I have a lot of practice from doing it to you

    I know yall think the baby is a little boy

    But Im pulling for a little girl, you know what I want to do

    Comb her hair, dress her up, and teach her the girly pretty stuff

    All that stuff I like to do

    but either way it ends up son it will still be cool

    because I will love he or she just the same

    because he or she will be a part of YOU


    Love,


    Mom​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this so beautiful i just don't have words to express what is felt inside this warmth
    a mothers heart is a treasure to a child .....
     
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    Just know that you're not losing a Son...
    but gaining a Daughter, which can only double your pleasure
     
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    Awww... In a way, our children will always be our babies, even when know they've grown up. But you acknowledge your feelings, go through the motions, and happily see that he's a man now, with a loving woman on his arm. This was such a beautiful expression, wow!
     
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    watz, queent, $$RICH$$:
    I luv all of you so much.:)

    Thank you all for your kind words on this piece.
    I was really having a hard time with this
    issue but I am feeling alot better about it now.
    Our babies do grow up don't they.
    Thanks again for the continued luv and support.
     
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    revisit such beauty
     
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