Black Poetry : A poem entitled " Backwords " ( hey ya'll, i finally made it, this is my 1st)

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  1. Hypnotize

    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    " Backwords "

    Running backwords,
    moving backwords,
    stepping backwords into falling into your embrace me.
    Little arms holding me, hugging me.
    Looking backwords -
    You Love I -
    Go Don't Please
    Taking backwords meant to settle for love setting into...
    " ..girl , your smile is bright as God,
    can I make you this happy ? "

    ...forgot what I was gonna say.

    Running back for words,
    but You loving Me is moving FOR words.
    but trusting You is running backwords, taking backwords.

    My fingers around your delicate waist
    bite circles around your round face -
    - - your waist, intricate circumference of my folded
    fingers faithfully orbiting like moons around your
    planet center of my universe- ity
    Backpack words.
    Abstract words.
    Deep Impact words.
    New addition to your family, subtract words.

    " Love " - take it back words
    " Love " - take it back words

    You don't Love me... you just love my doggy style.

    My too **** dependent on your presence
    wanna go for a walk
    sleep at your feet
    lick you in your face
    sleep closer to you to keep YOU warm doggy style.

    Love My For Settle
    Me Trust Can You
    Good so, Far so
    taking backwords.

    I love you.
    I love you too.


    All After Soulmates Maybe.

    Running back for words, to go forwards ... alone.


    __________________________________________________________


    about getting over someone you haven't quite
    gotten over, and then the song comes on... ****.
     
  2. Hypnotize

    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hope all my usual peeps view this,
    glad to have found ya - thanks poe.
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The five mic award goes to Hyp...

    Hypnotize,

    It's late as hell here (and I gotta pack to move) but, I had to check you out bro. This piece here was definitely CLASSIC. From beginning to end...PRICELESS. It's good to see you in the house...have a seat bro and let's rap awhile.

    -Five mics-

    one love, blak
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ****!!! OH... HOW I HAVE MISSED YOU!!

    HYPNOTIZE...

    all i could say during & after i
    read this piece was "he has arrived!!"

    this was done in your usual oh-so tyght
    hypnotic fashion & it just reinforced for me
    all the things i missed about you!!

    WELCOME HOME DEAR POET!!

    nowwww... do it to us some more... :wink:

    NothinButLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
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    It's About Time

    You Made It (lol) :lol:

    reposting family reunion
    topic
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hyp,

    Welcome home brotha!!! And ya came in rippin' **** ta shreds!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    DES BE OFF THE HOOK GLAD U MADE IT HOME
    NOW FLOW RIGHT ON!! MOVIN BACKWARDS
     
  8. Hypnotize

    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all kindly --
    and FIVE MICS ??? - maaan,
    that is the Highest Honor,
    ( well, that and the event
    where someone identifies or learns from my writing )

    You people define family .

    Not we must bring princess black here, i miss her.
     
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    Whoa, this was like tyght! Ya know ya got skillz, right?
    Flow on..

    8th!
     
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    yo this is the bomb,
    maaan

    crazy concept with a hypnotic twist...
    pure talent..

    j'hiah
     
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