Black Poetry : A Poem called "Naturally Me"

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  1. CreativeExpress

    CreativeExpress Active Member MEMBER

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    ]I'm dancing on the end, of a bright mojave moon. I am a torrent of innocence, honor, beauty, and strength. I shun the ways of the world, and their personification of beauty. The beat of my own unique rhythmic drum fills your ears, it's deafening tone coaxes you to turn and take notice to the spirit in me. I have an earthy presence that shouts into the freshness of the day. I am the dawn, the awakening, the newness that overwhelms you and takes over the soul. For I refuse to be the beauty queen in me, I've shirked the belief that the opulence of beauty is found only on the outwardness of one's being. I am the balance between genuine and generic. I swim livid pools of my individuality and drown in the freeness in me. For I am the nature, a creature of the ground,and with the turn of the day, I spring forward to spread my wings and fly. I am the earth, I am the one, I free your mind from the shackles of shallow. And together you and I dance and become high on our own mojave moon....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this great shine of the moon is beautiful
    keep flowing expressing and lovin
     
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    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yea

    this is beautiful,
    it reaches the soul on so many levels.
    it frees the angels,
    and shames the devil,
    and questions the thought of why one threw the pebble,
    and i understand.............beautiful....... :coffee:
     
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    this is a masterpiece, i loved it, it was so relaxing,
    much love,
    -story
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This poem makes me think of a free soul just enjoying the earth around them. I really enjoyed this mellow flow.
     
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    Your insight...gift and words were astounding...

    Brilliant piece...Absolutely Brilliant

    with excellent imagery and tone!

    I loved every part of it! Encore :spinstar:
     
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    Whoa...

    This was indeed tyte...
    swim in pools of my individuality and drowning in the freeness of me..wow
    DEEP!!!!!!!
    floE on...floE on :wink:
     
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    wonderful vision in this scribe
    very nice one here
    flow on
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  9. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    very nice..
    alive...being
    doing and still asking us to see..
    so that we too can
    dance..

    thank you...fabulous
     
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    The serenity that comes with recognizing and appreciating who u are is so rewarding
    I enjoyed this one
    Very well posed!
     
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