Black Poetry : A POEM 4 U

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I've lived at the end of tyme

    seen everything unkind by design


    I dewell on the edge of da world

    through life's exsitance of another


    I been bath in the water's of sorrow

    dat has held me captive in captivity


    With arachnary skillz and da quill mastery

    inside these chambers of my deepest slumbers


    I weave and paint a tapestry

    of her darken soul through visionary mass


    I know how to loved and suffer of a woman

    under pain and unsecurity to fine myself


    I entwine my fate through life's meanings

    spool on faith sown into an uplifting state


    My mind lingers in da past yet my heart in da future

    emotions cage between walls and inner depth


    I free myself in da spinster of morrow

    beyond boundaries and containment


    For i am not judged but seen as i am

    given da glory to be me fine myself to love me


    So that i can love

    embroidered with a chastened purity


    When i finish i leave my web upon da loom

    and the cracked shell redefined in redemption


    Shhhhhhh!!!! hush now .....


    For my happiness lay in da helms of another's grace

    for thy one whom so loveth me unconditionally


    There is nothing my heart can't bare

    for i have grown so complete to love


    I've made my transition into who i am

    with this i carry into my new stage of life


    I know now i am loved and secured

    mentally / spiritually / emotionally & physically


    Free


    A Dyamondluv connection

    Nu~wave Ink Creation & publishing
    Copyright ©2008 $Rich$
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :spinstar: Very Beautiful :spinstar:

    I like your work here, because it speaks of an evolved man.

    I especially like when you said "I've made my transition into who I am"

    that is comforting for a woman like myself to know, and something that your work always exubes.

    while many others are waiting to trenscend, you love, have arrived.
    :blowkiss:
     
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    free2b_me Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NICE....

    $$RICH$$, IM NOT GONNA NOTHING BUT GIVE YOU PROPS FOR THIS AND YOU ALREADY KNOW THAT I LIKE YA FLOW....:book:
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank you sweet apple*pie coming form you means a lot

    Thank you free2b_me wow that was touching that u say that !

    y'all gonna make me blush
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Great work $$RICH$$

    I love the mission you're on
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz bruh !
    yes this mission is a worthy one that will open new doors / gates and allow wonders
    so worthy and accepted .
     
  7. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    hmmmm

    i wonder where you're taking this playa playa?

    :thinking:

    lol

    ok ok ok

    i know now

    lol
     
  8. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sir Richness...

    As I took in each word it was like reading a journey. An expression that translates the growth of
    love for self becoming complete, finally and now ready to share love with someone else.

    There is always a soft, lovingly coziness to your poems that hugs
    me every time I read them.

    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so'ja i was going nowhere wit it but round the corner ya know !

    yes Coco.....collecting self redefined and renewed to love another ya right
    Thankz a million sis.
     
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    jus_dat_nice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I enjoyed your work like I always do
    Wonderful job
    Write on :10200:
     
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