Black Poetry : *A POEM 4 U"...*

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PriVateThOughtS, Feb 3, 2005.

  1. PriVateThOughtS

    PriVateThOughtS New Member MEMBER

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    +Your like a fresh scent
    of sweetness,
    Your skin glows of earthiness,
    the brown of you is a pure
    definition of true beauty,
    Just the thought of you takes me
    to that special
    place,
    A place where I can love you-
    hold you..
    Kiss the softness of you,
    the curve in your neck speaks to me,
    calls for me to come place tender
    moist kisses upon it...
    Your almond eyes full and
    deep,
    Visions of your wetfulness
    drowning my sheets-
    My lips traces from your arched
    back down to
    the round fulness of you,
    Brown sugar in just the palm of my hand...
    Lying you still so i can capture
    this moment again,and again...
    Tonguing every part of you,
    the hardness of your breast
    began to awake,
    Your soft belly trembles as i travel down south
    to your unforbidden fruits...
    You taste so sweet-
    Umm all this for me?
    I can feel my fantasy began to fade,
    then I am awake,
    and only left the moist evidence of
    an undenying lust
    for you...
    My dream girl this will one day
    be true,
    So lady would you lay?
    I promise i wont let your love
    go astray,
    This is for U and I...
    For our bodies and mind tobehold,
    To others these chersihed secrets doesnt have to be told..
    For U are I and we become an
    us,
    As we both explore one another in
    This *PrivateLuv*


    -PriVateThOughtS :hearts2:
     
  2. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lovely drop,
    PRivate Thoughts
     
  3. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi and welcome to the "zone" ...we call home
    You entered with a wonderful piece, very warm and touching. Surely someone must feel the vibes from this.
    nice work poet, relax, and let it all out, we're reading you.
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was sensually sweet, especially scribed for that private someone. I enjoyed the flow, hope to read some more from you.
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!!!!

    :hearthis:
    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the new home you found
    welcome to the family of peace & respect
    welcome from above as i bless this piece some love
    Tyte drop as two souls mend into one love exploring
    continue and welcome ! :great: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello and welcome to destee...
    likes this vibe it was sweet
    looking for you to drop some more
    come join us in our very own voice chat as well
    bring a flow or just chill with the family
    www.destee.com/chat


    Peace
    Angel
     
  7. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whew...now this was some journey...
    It flowed slow like honey...
    but it possessed the urgency of fire....

    the perfect balance of imagery, passion
    and erotica...

    Loved it!
    Sage
     
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