Black Poetry : A Poem 4 U

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  1. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If u will let me try 2 be there 4 u,
    I'm willing to take u there,
    I care about your feelings,
    Your wants and needs,
    U had everything that u possibly wanted,
    A gift from me, from da kindness of my heart,
    I'm willing to help u,
    Let me guide u the pathway,
    U have something special,
    You inspire me,
    The things u could do,
    I wanted to do too,
    I wanted to be u,
    U are a strong person,
    A mutual friend and confidant,
    What bothers me,
    Is that u don't want any help,
    I can't see u by yourself,
    When u're in pain,
    I can help u take it away,
    Don't fail on me,
    I have faith in u,
    Are u willing 2 let me take care of u,
    Help u gain back to health,
    U need to be strong,
    Hold my hand,
    And hold it tight,
    Is there a reason u're not happy,
    It's ok, i'll stay here by your side,
    Until the next sunrise,
    If u're not here,
    I'll be here,
    In spirit.

    AM:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautiful heart felt vibe
    may da blessing be upon da soul
    praying
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    now that's love!
    Feelin' this, Poet!
    Peace to ya!
     
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    that is beautiful and soul felt
     
  5. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm glad ya'll liked dis piece, i wish there was something else i could do, all i have is prayer. Prayin is a good thing, and i know god will call him home.:)

    AM
     
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