Black Poetry : A Plant

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rhymebad, Feb 16, 2011.

  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A Plant

    Home by choice and my tone of voice have changed
    From tenor to bass I’m in a place that’s very strange
    My mind travel on water unravel and slaughter then
    Rearrange thoughts, rhymes are crazy and boss blend
    With gravy and sauce that spin in taste buds and waste
    Scrubs like pails of water pumped by Jack and Jill chase
    Rats like Tom and Jerry, discover a party then cover my
    Body with a three piece suit, use Ebonics much but why
    Do I abuse tonic and shampoo for growth of hair and try
    Get waves? Look I’m a rap soldier renown and make cats
    Shiver from shoulders down drink folgers and crown bats
    With holy crosses no **** desires for vampires, with dance
    Steps torn up floors got boots I’ve worn outdoors a chance
    In HIPHOP my rhymes remain with purpose in a lame circus
    Of clowns yelling that they’re down can’t scatch the surface
    Use my knowledge like a hand tool they’re plans from school
    My muscles lubed with spinach, words come smooth cool
    And finished like cement or stucco, frequent corrupt yo
    Lke a volcano plus sang soprano in the choir and duck foe
    My vocab sway as an elaborate display on a platform and
    Stats swarm like bees while stinging I’m a singing man
     
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    free flow and swing low u go !!!!
     
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    Poet rhymebad,

    I enjoyed the change of pace and subject matter. Nicely done!

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    thanks for the props on this for real got to keep on keeping on
     
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