Black Poetry : A place between love and lust

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by THA HOOKUPMAN, Sep 29, 2004.

  1. THA HOOKUPMAN

    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    sage
    your poetic voice called out to me
    And I began my journey
    Traveling through
    The mists of passion
    And veiled Xtasy
    in the mist of life's tribulation storm
    I came to where your heart resides

    A place between love and lust
    Where she reigned as supreme
    Intoxicating me with her eyes
    Spell bounding my mind
    Making love to my mental
    She invokes orgasmic verbs
    And lyrics
    As I cum and succumb
    To her will

    making love in the spiritual
    I've been beckoned
    to answer your call
    from the desires
    that went forth from your soul
    as your body aches
    ready to create
    sage baby ...I yearn
    for you


    for you my special love
    a baptism
    in the essence of our love
    shall empower us
    with a divine lovemaking anointing
    as I take your
    hand
    body
    soul
    and spirit
    to join with mine
    one union

    She draws me closer
    sage's love song
    Hypnotizing me
    As she plays with my mental genitals
    Got me lost in a daze of Xtasy
    Like one submerged in a voodoo trance
    I begin to buck as she seduces me with her verbs
    a poetic Succubus
    Riding me in my mind

    As I begin ejaculating harmonic verbiage
    Singing a poetical pledge of faith
    Devoting my entire mind, body and soul to u

    feel my flow
    As it kisses your breasts
    and Plays with your nipple until
    it becomes rigid in anticipation
    Of my verbial tongue play
    nouns Gently biting and sucking
    As I move the adjectives downward
    Around the naval area
    Coming to rest
    Between the thighs
    Where you grant entrance to
    My tongue

    Syncopation and rhyme
    My metaphors are like hands
    Holding your hips
    As we dip
    You tighten your lower lips
    Around
    My words

    While pounding backwards
    Against my pen
    Meeting every letter of thrust I give
    The smell of intercourse filling the forums air
    The sexual sound of 2 wet minds consuming each other
    Fuels our passion fire
    As I feel eruption about to take place
    Your essence soaks my body
    As we continue
    Moans change to screams
    Of wild shonuff SEX
    on the forum floor in front of everyone

    As we both release in a state of orgasmic poetic pleasure
    That seems to last for a lifetime
    Our essences mixing together
    Making us truly one
    Both now and forever ..

    .whoooa,....i think im a need a drank....lol...

    .hookup

    :slobber: :slobber: :slobber: :slobber: :slobber: :slobber: :slobber: :slobber:
     
  2. mysslez

    mysslez Member MEMBER

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    this was most definitely worth the read......i'm feeling the physical relation to mental activity you display in this piece......looking forward to reading more.....

    LEZ
    At my purest
     
  3. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop:


    :hearts2: Thank You... :hearts2:

    I will never look at text...quite the same, lol...

    I'm going to get a gallon of water, take a swim...meditate, lol

    and then...*drumroll please*

    I shall return with a little word play for you...

    the things you do with words...simply fascinate me :sand:

    Sage

     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hookup…Baby
    Place your etymological aura between my open brackets…
    No more will your verbiage…be lost in translation
    We are…the linguistic element of man and woman
    Connected by the soul syntax…that makes our flow
    Completely phrased, claused and paused…
    In between the breaths that rise from open mouthed (text) sex…
    Filtrating the air around us…
    Toxic pleasure…white as light…wake us and we walk therein
    …I vogue my verbal stream before you
    Rhythmically, rhyming and (W)RIDING your Metaphorical Genius
    Yes…
    ………Yes
    Yesssssssssss…I will scream
    Until dawn…cums in the form of chiasmus

    "There's a poet that penetrates the poetess with passion. . . .
    There's a poetess that penetrates the poet with passion. . . ."

    And our rhetoric is “totally balanced”…

    Imagine if you will…a brilliant sunset dripping
    With black rays of ink anointed …consonants
    Swaying in total harmony with my silhouette…
    a tint of light on the curve of my …my….my…back
    arched in flow…And I am aglow…
    before you…
    ………….over you
    ………………………(W)RIDING you
    Into the passages of my anthology of contagion
    Sunset peaks through the strands of my hair
    ….hair – lashing you with the foreshadowing of euphony
    following the cacophony emitted in repetitious aphorisms
    from my lips…from my hips…from your sips…
    We fall deep into the realms our own alliteration…
    A hidden language unearthed through Solitary soliloquies
    on a stage of satin parchment sheets…
    allow my ink to saturate…penetrate…escalate
    permeate…and “create”…the ultimate form of writing…
    we’ve yet to experience…
    Allow me to possess your “Diction…”
    And elevate your language until…
    you are barely reminded of your humanity…
    silently screaming between the lines of my denotations
    Let’s Amplify our Bare Expressions…
    And intertwine this flow
    ~ Until ~
    As oxymoronic as this love of linguistics may seem…
    We transform…
    hot ice, cold fire, eloquent silence, alone together…
    As oxymoronic as the passion for words on fire may seem…
    Lets do this…almost exactly…acting naturally
    Over
    …..and Over
    …………..and Over
    As you place your etymological aura between my open brackets…

    And Our Souls Becum…One… Literarily Speaking :angel1:



    *could you pass that glass of water please…I need some too, lol *
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!!!
    dis was whoaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!
    all i can say just awesome u two
     
  6. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *outside, still trying to catch my breath* ...whew...and this is just "pen and paper talking...smh ...but with a smile of course.
     
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    :thinking: ok yall are poetic :love: at its best just skippin the :flowers: and goin straight for the :kiss2: lol thank goodness we dont have smilies to illustrate the TWO of you smh we might have to call DESTEE an ADULT site lololol

    poetic manifestations of something so beautiful as love could only be done justice by

    :love: :love:THE HOOKUPMAN & ANGELICSAGE:love: :love:
     
  8. Khasm13

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    this twin scribe has left me breathless....wow
    i'm at a loss for wordz...excuse me...wow
    one love
    khasm
     
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    oh, wow,....goodness gracious...that hookupman...wow...your poetry is wild
     
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    Well you know, both of you, I read this more than once already, and, far be it for me to want to be called a voyeur...So I peeked back in, and...QQ...it looks safe enough. I'll just say that this just took all the screws out of the spice rack and be on my way....QQ....
     
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