Black Poetry : A perfect view……

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A peaceful flow in the air as we
    Climb the stairwells to love…
    Inside a breeze as the water runs smooth
    A piece of heaven have fallen down
    As the earth begins to shift
    And the love flows upon
    my heart from yours….
    Move my soul
    Hold my heart….
    Touch my being…….

    Within da vision….
    A perfect view……

    A vison of you in a dream..
    Holdin me tight…
    Lovin me right….
    Wonderin how it would be at night..
    Within a vision of perfect
    Sight….
    I been here and there..
    Knowin my heart is true….
    So much love inside…
    But I took my time….
    Wantin to be complete…..
    As you walk in…..
    An extended your hand..
    Within the mind….
    No longer blind…
    As the sun begins to shine…
    I embrace the soul of the man…
    Feelin your heart….as you give
    Unconditionally…
    Lovin me for me…….
    Turning and twistin in a dream
    Of perfect view…….
    The ocean flows as the
    waves begin to raise
    within your arms is where
    I lay……..of a perfect view…….

    a blkangel thang....2004
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    a beautiful perfect view of heart within
    flow on ya pen talking
     
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    Sounds like love that was heaven sent...beautifully written.
     
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    this was was soooo serene...
    love like this is immeasurable..
    nice flow sister
     
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    Beautiful

    Simply Beautiful.. totally loving your flow!!!
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$
    angelicsage
    watzinaname
    shaneak

    thankz fam for the support and the love here...
    much love to you all
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    renee31127 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I felt like I was on some tropical island in the arms of some fine man(like that guy from the Barber Shop) ...lol thank you for taking me there.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    renee31127...cool glad ya enjoyed this read


    Hey Cindy glad you really enjoyed the flow
    and yea gurl in them arms of that man...
    ya get many views...lol


    Peace yall
    Angel
     
  9. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a "perfect view" into a loving moment


    beautiful peace...

    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
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    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful expression, who wouldn't want to relate to it... flow and all are very nice
    thanks for sharing
     
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