Black Poetry : ...a Peace for him.

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  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i am shyning…
    bright
    brighter
    my brightest
    & this is no arrogant
    confession of self-importance
    nor is it meant (in any way)
    to convey conceit
    i am shyning…
    because i am reflecting
    his radiance.
    he possesses an aura
    that manifests divine light
    & his essence
    in essence has
    amalgamated with mine
    & i’m… shyning
    his eminence is
    brilliance personified &
    i love what i’ve
    come to know
    & i know what i’ve
    come to love… him
    beautifulblackman
    embodied & i am
    reflecting him perfect-ly
    in every way imaginable
    to the heart & mind
    so… i am shyning like
    the stars in the night that
    hang over the Serengeti…
    i am shyning like
    the full moon that controls
    the sways & swoons of
    the river Nile…
    i am shyning like the glare
    that shimmers off the
    crown of the mighty Sphinx…
    i am shyning because
    he/theSun smiled at me…
    ...now i’m being allowed
    to flawless-ly reflect the
    exquisite-depths of his
    God-like deep…

    & it’s all very good.

    © SunShyneOrygynals 2002, all rights reserved
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sunshyne sunshyne !!! o' how devine u r when ya rays beam!
    i love this piece ..........thankz
     
  3. Aminata

    Aminata Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dag nabbit!!!!!

    where are my damned sunglasses when I need them???:cool: :D

    Just keep shynin sis!!!

    :heart:
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i love it...

    when warmth touches the depths of ones soul. let your brilliance shyne forth.:)
     
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    Sunshyne! This piece is SWEET! Feelin' you feel the love and Lovin' it gurl!

    ......now i’m being allowed
    to flawless-ly reflect the
    exquisite-depths of his
    God-like deep…


    Go 'head nah! :luv:
     
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    Agentshaft007 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As usual your eloquency gave me chills as I read. Your works are such inspiration. When I read many of your works I can imagine them being whispered through 2 soft nubian full lips as the words play rifs on my minds piano and dance throughout my body like the passion flow of blood that rushes to the excitement of your words and to that I say ...Muchas Gracias Bonita.

    Agent;)
     
  7. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this piece heyah is truly beautiful, sweet sunshyne...but surely, you must know.?.?.?. and ofcourse, i am lovin' the way that it just floats, yes indeed. keep on scribin' such beautiful love poetry as i continue to watch, dear friend.


    ~~~jusletitflo~~~
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Let it flow, let it flow ,let it flow!

    That was a beautiful and eloquently written piece(peace)
    anytime Love is reflected it must be respected!
     
  9. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh Miss Sunshyne....can I say you outshone yourself on this one;)

    beautifully said...

    K
     
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    Girl, you know you were talking about me when you wrote this. I am sooooooo thankful
     
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