Black Poetry : A Part of Me...

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  1. story

    story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    last one for the day...lol...bear with me I found some of my work from my beginning dayz! old treasures to me!

    December 28,1998
    6:19pm

    You are a part of me
    Literally, a part of my identity
    I have tasted your soul
    It has been devoured, digested, and
    Swallowed as a whole

    Inside of my heart
    You now live
    Pumping love, passion, desire, ecstasy and bliss
    Throughout my entirety

    With every breath I take
    You get to taste a piece of the cake
    That my love has baked
    One that is impervious to Escape
    Though he tries to put our love at stake
    Trying to make us separate
    But he is unable, because

    You are a part of me
    Literally.

    (c) 1998
    CNC


    i think i was in love then...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    it's lovely when we find one so dear
    to live inside our soul as whole
    a bliss of tenderness
    a taste of sweetness
    a pure heart from da $$RICHNE$$

    tyght scribe poet!
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes, i think you were, too. i also, think that this piece is very nice, as well.
     
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    yes...you were in love but that is what love does...it makes you see them as a part of the reflection in your mirror...

    truth spoken here poet...
     
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