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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PoeticMaster, Mar 22, 2001.

  1. PoeticMaster

    PoeticMaster Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As i sit on the stump
    i look from side 2 side
    the past cannot be buried
    by an rose
    only by the chains that bind
    my heart

    it seem like relationship r like
    children
    and springtyme is the place to go
    a place to see yo children grow
    a place only u and i know
    with my mind on the creation
    i place self strength to break steel
    my blood of river red drips to the
    canvas as i brush the heart of love
    i seal it up inside where i reside
     
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    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    felt this peace PoeticMaster
    springtyme is a beautiful time
    and it's upon us now

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  3. PoeticMaster

    PoeticMaster Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DESTEE

    springtime hit and still left a chill
    thanks for da read.....Queen
     
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    PM (my Nubian Kang)...

    what you need is some
    Sunshyne in your life...
    it woulda taken the
    chill ryght outta dat
    cold, cold day!! ;)

    this was melancholy... but heart-felt...

    MuchLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    NICE PIECE MASTERFUL ONE
    FLY LOW SO U CAN FLOW ON!
     
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    PoeticMaster Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sunshyne will u take away my chills
    and thrill me with warmth
    thankz for the read
     
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    This was very nice.... Definetely felt....

    8th!
     
  8. PoeticMaster

    PoeticMaster Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thankz fo ya love 8th
    with open heart
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this a classic one ...wow
     
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    Yeah I never would have found this one! Tight flow! Thanks for bringing this to the forefront!
     
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