Black Poetry : A Page For You

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desert Storm, May 23, 2002.

  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Loving you is so easy
    Yet so painful

    I feel for you deeply
    Yet I regret the way
    The end played out

    You're so far away
    Far away from me

    I believe I want you so much more
    Than when we were together, previously

    You're so hard to get
    And yet so hard to find

    When we touch
    Radiance feels the sky

    I wish I didn't doubt you so much

    I just want to trust you
    Like I did before

    Finding out who you are and who you thought you were

    Is what I find interesting
    I love you in many ways

    Still as this battle between my heart and my mind
    Ends up overwhelming my soul

    This passion
    Definately
    Comes as a surprise

    Longing to be one with you
    For all time

    Just you and me
    Underneathe the sky

    I miss you so much
    What can I do?

    You have me going in circles
    Do you ever think of me?

    Nobody knows it but me

    They think I've moved on
    I have so easily acted like
    I am over the way things used to be

    For some reason
    You stay within my heart

    And funny
    How everything reminds me of you

    Why did I break up,
    With you?

    Someone who I love so much?
    I just want to be with you, everyday
    This is a letter to you
    From I.

    Your lover, again,now,and forever
    That's why I'm writing a

    Page For You.

    Still in Love...

    Desert Storm
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DS,

    Nice....

    :heart:
    GQ
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well done lady love ..........stay lovin as u r
     
  4. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well done, and exquisitely executed.

    A heart wrenching peice about a relatable topic...So well done!
    Very touching!
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
     
  5. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    desert stormin'...this melancholy piece is simply beautiful. i really like these kind, because it captures the sadness and the love that you feel for that special someone all wrapped up into one piece and then, the masterpiece has been painted. keep on scribin' gurl, i am really feelin' this piece, too.
     
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