Black Poetry : A.P.B.

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PositiveMindset, Feb 7, 2004.

  1. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Calling all cars...
    Calling all cars...
    Be on the lookout 4 a blak male between the ages of 18-45...
    When U see him, use whatever's in your arsenal 2 take his life.
    K-9 is fine...
    I repeat, let your dog take a chunk outta his behind.
    If he lives, we'll just put him on the suspect line.
    Let an old lady who's senile of the mind point him out.
    If she can't decide, well, we'll persuade her.
    Tell her, look, if any of these ******* saw her on
    the street, he wouldn't hesitate 2 invade her.
    By choosin' even the wrong coon,
    she'd be doing her community a huge favor.
    Pick a monkey, any monkey, so we can prevent a murder,
    hold-up, or rape later.
    We'll use her fear 2 bait her.

    I got a dozen donuts 4 the 1st overseer, pardon me,
    officer who brings in a dozen coloreds...
    Bear claws, glazed, jelly, chocolate frosted, & crullers.
    I keep the powdered.
    A baker's dozen will get U one of these hookers we hooked
    4 at least an hour.
    That's 13 4 U dimwitted flatfoots
    4 those who are cowards, pair up...
    Wear shades so they can't see in your eyes that you're a scared fvck.
    C'mon y'all, we got a quota 2 meet...
    So all U jigaboo cops in cars, get out & walk beats.
    Y'all can handle it, cuz U come from those same streets.
    & since U work hard 2 impress us white cops,
    this will make your popularity increase...
    Just 4 this week.
    & a pat on the head 4 being a good boy...
    Now get out there & make us proud...
    Oh, & be careful out there.



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  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow...comically put, but nothin funny about the reality of this. Loved the way you posed this.
     
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    Oh my....this was so tyte.....I also like the way you posed this
     
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    Profiling...
    Corruption in Criminal Justice
    Munipulation of the community
    Abuse of power...

    REAL with all of it rawness...
    this piece may seem extreme to some
    but we know it's TRUE...


    "To Protect & Serve...I think not..."
    we see it and LIVE it everyday...
     
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    now this was tight my brother...
    i always look forward to your flows...
    i havent been around much in a few weeks.....
    so this was like the bomb for me
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Dang! this is so on point, and I agree that the sarcasm is a nice touch.
     
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    I enjoyed the flow and creative energy, but having a few members of my fam being officers I cant fully agree with it all, But I do respect any opinion of another nice scribe indeed. Flow on.
     
  8. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    watz., true indeed, it ain't no joke, cuz they get away every day with this. I thank U.

    Foxi, thanks 4 the read.

    angelic, undeniably, sister. Thank U 4 the feel.

    Brother XX, say it again. I use 2 want 2 become 1, so I could beat some cop @ss & get suspended with pay, cuz that seems 2 be all that happens 2 them when they beat our brothers.

    mzblk., I can't thank U enough 4 your words. They bring happines 2 my mind.

    gempis, sarcasm is all they speak. Thank U.

    Brother caramel, I'm sorry that some of your family is on that side of the line, I also have some that are cops. Not all are bad, but I haven't seen many. I truly thank U 4 your open mind seeing past the differences of opinion, still remaining appreciative. This is what true constructive criticism is about, & I accept it willingly.Thank U 4 your words, brother.
     
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    the system is so corrupt, it makes me mad when i think about all the inocent blacks that were jailed for no reason....this is today i'm talk'n bout :madd:
    mad mad props for this piece pos...mad props
    one love
    khasm
     
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    this is a tight flow..
    and what is so cool about being in this family
    is how we do share our thoughts
    that is how we grow...and know whats up
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart: