Black Poetry : a note to the queen of hip hop (cinquain)

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  1. TotalView

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    mary
    can you see them
    the ancestors on high
    seated in blue robes their sandals
    and staffs

    tapping
    on clouds cherubs
    dancing behind their dreads
    swinging left/right to the bounce of
    the moon

    goddess
    hathor rising
    from her throne whispering
    softly ah yes my young sister
    sing. sing.


    © Kiwanda Paul
     
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    $$RICH$$, you gave me an A+?!! Does that come with a gold star? (smile) Thanks for reading and leaving words. Sharing what you think of my work means a lot to me.

    candeesweet, thanks for taking the journey with me...and thanks for visiting and leaving words.

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