Black Poetry : a note to him

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  1. TotalView

    TotalView Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i am so in love with you
    that when you say my name
    everything inside me pulsates
    but i'm seriously
    considering legally
    changing my first name to "sweetie"

    yes baby you're my him
    come swim in my love
    because i'm your water
    and everything else
    in a woman you will ever need

    and you know i would never
    let you drown
    because my love runs eternally
    and every breath in me
    belongs to you

    and there will never be a need
    to pick up that twenty five pound bag of sugar
    i'm already sweet
    sweet as cotton candy
    melting in your mouth
    sweet like a hershey bar
    in between a s'more

    and don't worry baby
    if you ever pass out
    from sugar shock
    i'll revive you
    with deep kiki kisses

    sometimes i catch myself
    sitting like a child
    under the japanese maple
    in my front yard
    thinking about spring
    and the return of butterflies
    while scratching your name in the mud
    with a big stick
    until i begin to imagine you
    as a glorious mountain range
    and i your blue sky
    and as your sky
    i would pluck out
    my own sun moon and stars
    to become blind
    if you wanted me to only be able
    to feel your smile in my hands


    and even last night when i turned
    to view my own shadow
    playing in the snow
    all i saw was you

    now you know
    i'm writing this giggling
    sitting here with all these
    would you huhs
    stored up inside me
    waiting to be whispered
    in your right ear

    and my only hope is
    you're reading this thinking
    so sweet...
    ...so sexy
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well displayed , the love shown he better know of thee......sweet release
     
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