Quiet Poetry Lounge : a note to a loved one

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by TotalView, Mar 25, 2014.

  1. TotalView

    TotalView Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My Sistah…of the written word realm
    Thank you,
    For your generosity and selflessness
    And concern for my happiness
    And…bless your efforts to uplift me
    Through your written word ministry
    Ensuring that I not be alone
    …not feel alone
    That I might stand on my own
    Let us crack that government seal
    Not on Jack but let the champagne spill
    …its bubbly tickling the ugly out of our musings
    Let us never be found…abusing
    The gifts of love granted us
    Between us
    Allowing us to trade barbs like this
    Forever ending with the kissssss
    Of us.
    Thank you, My Sistah
     
  3. TotalView

    TotalView Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for comforting me
    with your lovely wordology
    brother of the written word ministry

    I Sang a Song (Black Woman)
    will live on in my heart forever
    uplifting me when I feel down.

    You are truly a treasure, my dear friend.

    (smile)
     
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    Thank you, James.
    Your support of me
    is incredibly uplifting
    and helps me forge forward
    even when I don't think
    I have the energy, desire
    or talent to do so.

    (smile)
     
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    The juxtaposition of hearts is the stock and trade of a poet. You, dear poet, exemplify that fact. Your words speak volumes.
     
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    Forever Uplifting!

    Thank you kindly, Poet!

    (smile)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I needed this the words of great hearted love....my sister my sister thank you dearly
     
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