Black Poetry : A Night To Remember

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by THEONE, Apr 28, 2004.

  1. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I dont know about this one, I was trying something a little different to see if it worked.



    Sweaty bodies, lustful kiss, us getting aggressive!
    Candle lights, red wine, As we get excessive!
    Sinful thoughts, sexual feelings, temperature steady rising
    A kiss on the neck, you start to undress, sensually appetizing!
    As we glance at each other, bodies begin to shutter
    So we both know what’s coming next
    As I lean towards your ear and whisper come near
    While I stroke and caress your breast!
    Countless sounds as, we feel around, and we’ve only just begun
    The foreplay is great, as you start to shake, come here girl don’t run!
    Anticipations, no hesitations as nature takes its place
    Relax and lay back, and like beautiful music I’ll start to set the pace!
    Up and down to a tempo so smooth, This is called making love
    Like birds of a feather we bond together bodies becoming one
    Orgasmic sounds as we come down off natures highest peak
    At the end of the flight, and all through the night we lie there and try and speak!
    But there’s no use of words for what was so superb allowed us only sighs and squeaks!
    It goes without saying this is one for the books
    An escapade to remember the night we got took
    Taken to another level by nobodies fault at all
    I guess this what’s ment, when they say your body calls!


    BY:
    LJ
    8/02
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Okay, okay...I felt the vibes too :sand: ..
    who had time for words :huh: ...this piece is awesome.
     
  3. theDynasty1979

    theDynasty1979 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ummm.... yeah, it DEFINITELY works.... excuse me while i uhhh... go take care of something (lol)
    peacebeme-MsDy
     
  4. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THnk you, Thnks you
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    look out i'm feeling dis flow head
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like the way this was crafted, a bit spicy, and smoothly written.
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ummm TheOne hmmmm
    it works for me yes indeedy
    likes this
    Peace
    Angel
     
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