Black Poetry : A Night Out

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MADDRAPPER, May 30, 2002.

  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A NIGHT OUT

    DJ at the club rocking, I’m a thug knocking on wood girl in a mini
    Skirt does plenty flirt; look at her tit nips let the skit rip and sip henny
    This brother love romances but a thug faces other circumstances
    Can’t take chances, being fake never enhances your sex advances
    Took complex glances at honey’s lips, funny she’s all that a bag chips
    Dew rag drips sweat as her hips git round and brown mind trips
    Girl sit down you fine and sip something yeah take rum and coke
    Later we can smoke some dope, yeah can’t slumber got to cope
    Get her number I hope, feel dumber because I’m broke
    Girl let’s ride in my hummer nope, you may try to git it
    Aw girl I won’t mess wit it, dang need a legit skit
    To git a little bit and fiddle wit the tits and rub coo-chee hairs
    In juicy love affairs smoo-ches lights a girl’s body like flares
    Set money aside so I can give honey a ride in the Lex
    Got pride but a man need sex to survive in a world so complex
    Statistics is ballistic and wet just to kiss it make you sweat
    MADD you want to kiss and twist my tongue like a net
    Get some and make the bed wet you know how mushy my thing get
    you’re a pushy threat, naw girl not me stop reading the Jet
    Magazine no MADD this sista sista **** I wanna kiss her
    MADD the hood brothers are ill but in good will could you
    Just chill? My juicy coo-chee love the spill, but booh
    A thug can fill it up for you girl in just one thrust boom!
    Trust me your flowers will bloom after a few hours in the room
    Like showers in White Diamond Perfume

    MADDRAPPER PEACE
     
  2. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    Tight Flow!

    i love this part

    "get her number i hope, feel dumber b/c i'm broke"

    I SIMPLY LOVE IT! :lol:

    nice job

    pd :)
     
  3. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    poeticdelight THANKS FOR RESPONDING TO THIS FOR REAL GIRL YOU ARE SWEET
     
  4. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I don't often comment on your posts, because they are more like rapping and it's a different flow from poetry...yet it is poetry nonetheless, so I just wanted to say that I am feeling you...feeling this rhythm, feeling the beat...feeling how you write...it's a different level, but I am loving it! That's the best way I know how to describe what I feel when I take a visit to your world and enjoy it!
     
  5. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MOS DEF!

    MOS DEF
    NO LESS
    A BROTHER
    SEEM TO DO HIS BEST
    WHEN HE GOT LESS
    GOT NO REASON TO CONFESS
    SEX AT IT'S BEST DON'T EVEN REST
    ON A WALLET!
    GOTT A FOLLA IT!
    CAUSE HE GOT YA GIT.
    YOU WANNA GIVE HIM IT!
    CAUSE YA KNOW IT'S GONE FIT!
    BLESSINSG ON YA HOUSE!
     
  6. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    redlady AND msluciousb thanks for peeping this for real glad yall liked it as for the rap part it's all good doe. msluciousb thanks for the poem also
     
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