Black Poetry : A newcomer

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sensitivetj319, Dec 13, 2003.

  1. sensitivetj319

    sensitivetj319 New Member MEMBER

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    Hello, I've been visiting this site for a while and thoroughly enjoy the Vibe. I'm a little nervous to step into this arena with such talented poets...but here goes my flow, I hope you guys enjoy my work as much as I enjoy yours.

    Strong Coffee

    Strong Coffee
    No sugar, no cream.
    Just ground Nubian beans of his essence. Sheer oral pleasure prods my senses when I'm in his presence.
    Folgers...ain't got nothing on this brotha, cuz no one fills my cup quite the way he does.
    Strong coffee
    No sugar, no cream.
    In it's purest and most potent form, not watered down or sugar coated, cuz ain't nothing like the real thing
    Never imitated or duplicated, cuz can't no one perk me up quite the way this brotha does.
    Strong Coffee
    No sugar, no cream
    Just caffeinated steam lingering above my lips that tantalizing aroma reaching my fingertips.
    I inhale him as he gives me that extra boost.
    The adrenaline rush that only I crave cause everyone can't handle his special brew, like I can!
    And see, not only is he my 6 a.m wake up call
    He's the last things my lips savor before drifting off to drink him in my dreams.
    Each sip better than the one before
    Pure ecstasy as I savor each and every drop
    and I don't waste time on frowns, when I have to stop sippin...cuz the cups empty
    Cuz see, that just means he'll fill me up again.
    To the top, my cup runneth over
    And see, I never tire of him, because each moment with him is like a new flavor
    Mocha, Hazelenut, Toffee, French Vanilla, Amaretto
    You name it, this brotha's got it....
    Strong Coffee....No sugar, no cream.
     
  2. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:

    I sure did enjoy this piece, sensitivej319. Welcome! So glad you decided to step into our house. Really lookin forward to seein more from ya.
     
  3. Alpha Male

    Alpha Male Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Re:to sensitivetj319

    What you wrote I understood
    What you wrote is some what good
    If you would like some pointers
    Just ask I'll provide some answers!
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!

    :wave: o'yes welcome to destee.com :wave:
    poetic playground u found the house made
    the right choice to join us in scribe welcome
    within da place to reside :star: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:

    this was very well done and sweetly posed to canvas
    happy u here upon us this was awesome please continue !!! :eek:hmy:
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave:welcome to destee....
    nice flow posed very well
    hope to read more....:angel1:
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi:wave: welcome to the family
    of love and embrace
    this is a nice flow
    i am truly looking forward
    to reading more
    Peace
     
  7. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome, welcome!!! You have quite a way with words...looking forward to hearing more from you.
     
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    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such a nice, thirst quenching introduction.

    Glad U decided 2 ride on this mental excursion with us.

    Enjoy.
     
  9. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WELCOME!!!!

    Welcome 2 the family
    :coffee: I enjoyed your poem with my Coffee this morning!
     
  10. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well now!

    I must say...I do love a good cup of coffee..."Black"

    I hear ya sistah!... :coffee:


    Welcome! :wave:
     
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