Black Poetry : A NEW KIND OF TEAR

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MORE, Sep 22, 2003.

  1. MORE

    MORE Banned MEMBER

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    i sit here and still
    cry unexpectantly.
    memories flash like fallin stars
    of what u did to me.

    and i laff thru the pain
    cause i just can't believe
    i let u do this, to me
    a queen.

    ur criticizims and cuttin words
    from ur insecurity made me hurt
    and still
    i wanted it to work.

    u put on you suit
    and put on a show
    but little did your employees know
    mentally, ur a little boy.

    used to cry till i choked
    till i thought i would die
    thowin up my insides
    on the mere thougt, of good-bye.

    broken spirits and brittle bones
    gave my yielding heart
    the most
    unstable home.

    and thru all this,
    i sitll cry
    but now because i realize
    im Gods child.

    and all the trials u put me thru
    will come back
    seven fold
    on you.

    and i cry happily
    awaiting my victory
    cause slowly, slow-ly so-low-ly
    im feeling free.
     
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    SUNkissed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwww..... how MOVING...(snaps).... I feel proud of you.. and wanna :hug: you too!!.. you are a strong sister.
     
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    YES! this is how ifeel too gurl!!! im so glad you are moving on. he will truly get what is due to him. tyte flow:D
     
  4. MORE

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    :grouphug: :yo:
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhhh so so SO happy my sista is crying tears of healing :)
    *blowin my nose* lets cry together :) lol
     
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    Feelin this, feelin this....so glad ur feelin tha strength that's arising in you. This flows so well, by the way.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was very well felt
    the tears as one move forward
    the emotions was well felt
    keep going and singing
     
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    HODEE going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    MORE.. thanks for sharing.

    " u put on you suit
    and put on a show "

    This is all he has to give and you know. That! Love moves on.
     
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    feelin this...
    flow was there...
    great vibe
     
  10. UniqueOne

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    very powerful piece i'm loving the vibe i could feel every word
     
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