Black Poetry : A Needless Intervention

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by howardtsu, Jun 11, 2008.

  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    some days were better than others

    [eve sighs]

    she put down the letter

    he’d eventually find another

    then she picked up the sweater

    it was pretty

    maybe her mother was right

    it was a waste of time to fight

    [she calls her brother]

    hello?

    do you think Howard will be on the next flight?

    peter :

    i think there was a delay, he’ll be in New York City for at least another hour

    eve :

    thanks Peter

    peter :

    no problem

    [on the set of Rush hour 4]

    director :

    do you really think he’s the right guy?

    producer :

    all I can say is that we should give him a try

    director :

    so where is he now?

    [producer shrugs]



    [at Bow Wow’s]

    bow wow :

    did Eve really make that vow?

    [Jermaine nods]


    [Bow Wow shaking his head]

    wow!!!!!!!!

    [at the airport]

    howard :

    whew …. I need some chow

    Quiznos could work

    ah ….

    [after paying for the food]

    Chicken Carbonara …. Delicious

    [while eating Howard thinks to himself]

    this time away from Eve has been viscious



    tourist#1 :

    there he is

    tourist#2 :

    are you sure? he doesn’t look suspicious to me

    tourist#1 :

    oh that’s him alright

    tourist#2 :

    you’re being superstitious

    tourist#1 :

    are you telling me that all the claims we’ve heard are fictitious?

    tourist#2 :

    no but I do believe if he were a little more ambitious he would’ve …..

    [grabs her hand]

    tourist#2 :

    honey, what are you .... ?

    tourist#1 :

    let’s go find out

    excuse me sir

    howard :

    hey guys

    tourist#1 :

    is that nutritious?

    howard :

    i hope so

    tourist#1 :

    thanks for your time

    [they hurry away]

    howard :

    what was that all about?

    [around the corner]

    you were right honey

    [ his wife agrees]

    just like Eve we took the wrong route

    there’s no doubt

    he loves her





    love,

    eve & howard
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like the way you're slowly opening up the window to this scenerio, including all the extras just makes it that much more interesting howard. And no need to investigate, howard loves eve.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I knows howard love's Eve and eve knows too ....no doubt about that so watz right
    no need to go any deeper on an investigation
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    People Know ya when ya walking pass.....or while ya eating quiznos LOL
    Everyine is Asking the big Question.....but there is no question
    Red pill, or Blue Pill?
     
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    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks guys :wave:
     
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