Black Poetry : **** a nay sayer!

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  1. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i close my ears to a nay sayer.
    who are you to tell me i can't?
    do you controll my fate?

    nay i say to you!
    it is in my hand's and my creators
    God who empowers me to be!

    **** you nay sayer!
    who die an made you the captain of my fate?
    I close my ear to you negativity!
    I close my eye to your look of disdain!
    I close my mind to your fatalistic thoughts
    that would precipitate a nay sayer's mentality in me.
    **** you nay sayer!

    I am me! take it or leave it!
    but as I live and die i will not accept
    your nay saying, assanie, flawed view of me
    for I say "yea, yea and amen!"


    (excuse me, i was a little angry!!!)
     
  2. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel ya bruh!

    Sometimes it can get like dat.
    Tyte scribe poet.:toast:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u speaketh on da real

    feelin' dis through N' through
    so many be like dat too.....i agree wit Rashad:eek:
    tyght deep truth
     
  4. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    klabarron

    I'm definitely feelin' this piece....

    Write them words poet!

    N2
     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    SHAKE THEM HATERS OFF!

    They can never dictate nor define YOU!

    Great piece! I feel the same way!
     
  6. loveconquersall

    loveconquersall New Member MEMBER

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    I am so feeling this write..a lot of times I get angry with people and their negativity sometimes to the point where it feels like it is getting the best of me until I began to write to get the nay sayers off my back. My mother always tell me to love my enemies and of course the word of God says the same, but sometimes you get weary with all that negativity. Love the write (snap, snap) my fellow poet.
     
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