Black Poetry : A Natural Conditioned Response

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticdelight, Sep 27, 2001.

  1. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    making love to me
    is like soft wind in the heat of summer

    a gentle breeze in the coldness of winter
    and kisses ever soft and tender

    eloquently laying upon every ember of
    your soul sparking resurgent flames until
    you say my name

    losing control of me and refraining from being
    tamed having no sense of shame

    your heart what i aim for
    love what i proclaim in making you say my name







    apt copyright 2001 :kiss:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    making love 2 ya

    is like mixed caresses
    on a roll of gentle touchies
    lace in a tender kiss
    the bliss of love making
    is feverish send ya body
    in a heated boiling point
    and the hardness of both
    ummmm!! love making!:heart: :)
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PD

    tantalizing naturalness...... sweet and simple



    One
     
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    sexe1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Delight,

    This is beautiful...I am at a
    loss for words.
    :eek:
     
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    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    ooouuuuuuuuuuuuuu ... i'm tell'n .... :)

    very nice PoeticDelight

    Destee
     
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    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    pd...this is simply written but beautifully said...combining the heart/mind/soul in an act of pure love.."like a soft wind in the heat of summer"..now we know how good that feels...

    K
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoaa

    this was sultry "by the fireplace" experience with this piece pd.

    you must have just listened to that Alicia Keys or Brian Mcknight or sumn' :lol:
     
  8. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    thanks everybody

    no jh actually i wrote this on my way to class
    one morning... :confused: (have no clue)


    pd :)
     
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