Black Poetry : A mystery person inspired poem...

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  1. story

    story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (MP=mystery person)

    The first time we embraced, I felt my troubles melt away.
    And the first time we kissed, my desires were finally given attention
    Not to mention, my tension faded...

    The first time we made love,
    you made love---
    The next time we made love, WE made love...tasting every drop of you slightly quenched my thirst...

    Drip all over my tongue---
    Fill me up---
    I can't get enough---
    I can never become too drunk
    I'm an MP-holic

    But do I need to attend rehab?
    Is this a healthy addiction?
    Or a foundation for emotional affliction...

    As tiny drops of rain fall outside of my window, I wonder why the wind blew me your way
    I wonder why your are the Christmas gift that I've always wanted but never got---

    You see, I ask these questions aloud to myself
    With great diction
    I question what will be gained
    At the end of this mission,
    A beautiful friend?
    Or a broken heart?

    And you see, it's not your fault
    Because I knew what direction I would be heading towrd on this walk
    Into a park of selfishness---
    Next to a pool of confusion
    Filled with children and childish Hope...

    Dreams, just dreams
    I suppose that what we have
    Can be called nothing but a dream
    And it only exists when other's eyes are closed...

    Goodnight...

    (c)2001
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hummmm!!!!! da answer is held within
    only u know ......go head and flow
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    haven't read you before...but i'm sure going to read you in the future.

    let the river flow.
     
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    AND SOMETIMES WE ARE AWAKE INSIDE THE DREAM!

    WOW! It's like you and I are experiencing the same thing. That is comforting in a way to know that others can have doubts about something so wonderful, or potentially wonderful. But , yet it is the most humbling, life altering decision any of us has to make.
    Yeah this was on point...with a sharp pin! OUCH!:uhoh: :uhoh: :uhoh: :uhoh: :uhoh: :uhoh: :uhoh: :uhoh:
     
  5. story

    story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you!

    I finally found my way in here and hope to post more often!
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    story.


    i read this the otha day. :)

    ...& i just had to come back by to tell
    you how much i enjoyed it!

    thanks for sharing.

    alwayspeace.

    elayne.
     
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    AACOOLDRE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This poem makes me want to fall in love
     
  8. story

    story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow! I've never gotten that comment b4...

    makes you Want to fall in love....


    makes me remember being in love...
     
  9. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Please

    Keep postin cause this hea was all that!!!!

    Reas
     
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    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gee have we all been in the same room with the same romance? You sure said if for me Story.
     
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