Black Poetry : A Muse for Marc

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GA_Sunshyne, Jul 28, 2001.

  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    initially I was intrigued…
    by who you appeared to be
    so… I asked… if…
    you would like to know me
    (you acquiesced sweet-ly)
    & the rest is our-story
    cause ever since then
    (all day long at least) :D
    you’ve been… softly doing
    a dance on my mental &
    sens(you)ously
    slip/sliding all along my chi
    & in my minds eye… I am
    imagining… You.
    I’m picturing things…
    like… the position of your
    lips as my name poetically
    drips… from your mouth…
    (wait a minute!) :uhoh:
    I doubt if I should’ve even
    gone there… but… the thought
    appeared so I had to share…
    (ryght?)
    & I’m wondering…
    given tyme… what
    you’ll grow to be for me—
    my friend?… my lover?…
    either way we won’t suffer
    we’ll just take advantage of
    the new horizons we’ll discover
    anyway!…
    I just needed to say that…
    all day long you’ve been
    dancing on my mental…
    slip/sliding along my chi…
    & making my heart smile
    by offering me the amazing
    opportunity to experience
    You… unfiltered
    (& I’m not disappointed one bit)



    © SunShyneOrygynals 2001, all rights reserved
     
  2. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    tight flow GA

    let the rays of sunshine blend within our hearts

    pd
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PD. :)... i musta done somethin' ryght... finally!
    it's good to see you! thank you for the read & the
    reply... how've been? :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    U DONE HIT IT AGAIN

    GOT MY SHADES ON NOT BLIND
    SLOWLY I WALK THROUGH THE
    THOUGHTS AND SEE THE BEAUTY
    OF MANY COLORS LIKE A RAINBOW
    WHEN DA SUN SHYNE BRIGHT
    BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN ............:D
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NICE GA JUST HAD TO WRITE A PIECE FOR THIS RIGHT HERE

    WELL KEEP DOING IT GIRL LOVING THIS PIECE YOU WROTE WOKE ME UP TO SOMETHING

    MADD you dance on my mental romance the central
    Juices which looses my bra strap need your body potential
    Girl I fear your brassiere and your breast nip drip love milk
    Look boo a thug don’t wilt
    Got a thug quilt in the room smell white diamond perfume silk
    Girl your breast is a pacifier for my fiyah body brown and built
    Hips round with that soul tilt
    So soft girl take em off no well just let me shake it soft oh MADD
    Let me think so wet on the brink of making love can’t think a tad
    Bit hot MADD stop wait a minute you wanna go up in it don’t cha?
    True boo you know I want ya
    Oh he wanted to jerk up my mini-skirt and do plenty work
    Didn’t wanna blush so I flirt MADD make the Henny perk
    Oh yea baby gonna go crazy in your gravy girl can’t control it
    Its long MADD fold it ready? no hold up a second before you pole it
    Girl love your body this thug head twirl at the party need Your red lip
     
  6. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    woah

    hold up stop the love train i have my ticket
    drop that heart off to the shop, Da Street So'jaz, Inc. we can fix it
    the number's unlisted
    but this taste is sweet like a Purple Passion Mystic
    and oh that red lipstick

    thanks for the love it's real
    too real
    so genuine
    pure peach
    and bringing that sunshyne

    to a very sweet person
    almost to real to be true
    what you gonna do when they come for you


    :heart:
    love and endure


    DSSNY
    soon to hit you back
     
  7. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice expression of wonderings. Enjoyed very much. Thanks.

    BE
     
  8. bassaman

    bassaman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well, well

    this is a very special piece, for real...I like the way you voice yourself! Speak it loud, and sweet!

    ciao
     
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    ****...

    i salute Marc, for inspiring such a piece...and bow to the sunshyne for pouring this out amongst the family...letting us glimpse her soul for a moment.

    tyte.
     
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    Ms. Sunshyne...

    this is ohhh so sweet, Poet...indeed!


    a
     
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