Black Poetry : A Move On Me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PropheticNsyght, Jul 6, 2004.

  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You put some sort of je ne sais quoi
    on me...
    spread through my heart like wild fire,
    conquered and and brought me under.
    I became your sacrifice and you my voodoo
    priestess.

    It was pointless for my 'city' to resist
    your onslaught.
    You won and I fell into your embrace.
    I found that I loved you the way I loved
    my next moment of life.
    The feeling was deep and undefined.
    I swallowed your sea and floated on colors of
    cool blues, chilly reds and warm browns.

    Like watermelon on a breezy afternoon,
    You made love to me with your eyes and your
    words caressed my spine...
    I...
    fell into a heap...
    right at your feet...
    drooling and weeping up your sea.
    I drowned you in me and you swam,
    loving the feeling and the emotion
    I proclaimed.

    Whispers to the moon,
    and you ask your neighbors, but there was
    only me.
    I relive each moment and breath each
    released sigh and unspoken word of
    devotion and...Love.

    ~Copyright 2004
    "Earth's Delight" Publishing
    PropheticNsyght
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed on point here tyte drop word up !!
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this stanza amplified the entire piece...

    love the je ne sais quoi

    when it becomes indefinable

    you know you've got it bad...

    Wonderful Peace Poet...

    All wrapped up in this one!
     
  4. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich and Angelic. I love you guy so so so much! You make my day and my nights and my everthings! God bless you both.
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A Move On Me...and what a soul stirring move it was.....
     
  6. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :eeek: whoa.....tight drop
     
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