Black Poetry : A Move On Me

[PropheticNsyght]

You put some sort of je ne sais quoi
on me...
spread through my heart like wild fire,
conquered and and brought me under.
I became your sacrifice and you my voodoo
priestess.

It was pointless for my 'city' to resist
your onslaught.
You won and I fell into your embrace.
I found that I loved you the way I loved
my next moment of life.
The feeling was deep and undefined.
I swallowed your sea and floated on colors of
cool blues, chilly reds and warm browns.

Like watermelon on a breezy afternoon,
You made love to me with your eyes and your
words caressed my spine...
I...
fell into a heap...
right at your feet...
drooling and weeping up your sea.
I drowned you in me and you swam,
loving the feeling and the emotion
I proclaimed.

Whispers to the moon,
and you ask your neighbors, but there was
only me.
I relive each moment and breath each
released sigh and unspoken word of
devotion and...Love.

~Copyright 2004
"Earth's Delight" Publishing
PropheticNsyght

 

[$$RICH$$]

indeed on point here tyte drop word up !!

 

[angelicsage]

You put some sort of je ne sais quoi
on me...
spread through my heart like wild fire,
conquered and and brought me under.
I became your sacrifice and you my voodoo
priestess.

this stanza amplified the entire piece...

love the je ne sais quoi

when it becomes indefinable

you know you've got it bad...

Wonderful Peace Poet...

All wrapped up in this one!

 

[PropheticNsyght]

Rich and Angelic. I love you guy so so so much! You make my day and my nights and my everthings! God bless you both.

 

[watzinaname]

A Move On Me...and what a soul stirring move it was.....