Black Poetry : A MOTHERS TOUCH

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  1. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A MOTHER’S TOUCH


    In the womb I laid,
    Where at sometimes seemed like the safest place to stay
    Was the first time that I heard you pray
    You prayed for a loving spirit and a beautiful heart

    God granted me that

    You prayed that the maternal nurturing would stay encouraging
    Even if life wasn’t promised to us from day to day

    God granted me that

    Pushing me from the womanly shores onto this earth
    I was also praying for all it’s worth
    Straight from the heart of your baby girl
    I said, God my mama’s too good for this world

    So he quickly reached deep down and preserved your soul
    Then he slowly took your body as a whole
    God agreed he was in need of an angel
    So he took you into his arms and out of harms way

    WELCOME TO HEAVEN ENJOY YOUR STAY!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nothing like da touch from da womb to the caressing arms

    enjoyed this here , reminds me of a series i did not long ago
     
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    Beautiful Poet
    The Lord gives us life after
    Death with the ability to grace
    With angels wings-Touching Sister
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :hearts4: Thank you Rich and Tantrum
     
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    Cursed Heart....

    Nothing like a Mother's touch.......I'm feelin' that one.:blowkiss:
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks spiceybrown:blowkiss:
     
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    Nothing better that this.
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :hearts2: Thank you Ibrahim
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nothing like it too her touch
     
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    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    wow....cursed, it seems like you are telling my story also...i lost my mother at a early age...

    a beautiful write...God has granted you a loving spirit and a beautiful heart.....I can tell.....
     
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