Black Poetry : a mother's song

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  1. patrice

    patrice Active Member MEMBER

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    my essence was honored by your presence god
    you represented
    had me open like black moon for a minute
    you dug up in it
    with no protection
    left your injection
    which created perfection
    yet, left an imperfect situation
    divine manisfestation?
    i don't know, but nevertheless
    she's screaming daddy with head buried in my chest
    i'm replying mama, cuz baby daddy isn't here
    just me and you love against the world
    i dry her tears
    and pray that the creator will order my steps along the way
    i pray for sunshine and spiritual strength on rainy days
    i hold her tightly
    and rock the goddess divine to sleep
    then dry my own tears
    for even the strongest mothers weep.
     
  2. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was beautiful...though sad when a child does not have the love of two parents...but

    where there is strength, there is hope
    where there is love, there is love returned

    there is both in a mother who loves her child more than life...

    K
     
  3. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    deep piece.

    stay keeping God 1st.
    jh.
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WONDERFUL!

    This was a wonderful piece of Love, you showed your elegance, and your skills girlfriend, your compassion and strength showed, through and God will do the rest!
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
     
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    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah Yeah, I gotta say that was touching. Loved the way you prescribed it too. Holla.
     
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    YeshuJah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    JAH knows how this **** hurts I & I- for real. I & I chant JAH'S forgiveness and healing for this situation wherever it exists.

    JAH Lives.
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "...even the strongest mothers weep"
    yet, they stand
    firm in the ground they're rooted in
    strong in the knowledge they will get it done
    deep in their determination to weather the storm
    and once the storm is no more
    they will lift their heads to the FATHER, saying;
    "THANK YOU...for seeing me through."
    coz they know from whence their strength flows.

    continue...my sistah.
     
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