Black Poetry : A Mother's Love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by epiphany, Nov 20, 2001.

  1. epiphany

    epiphany Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    captivating sight to see
    a mother loving her baby
    nurturing with tender care
    basking in proudness
    she kisses, holding, loving
    him with each tender stroke
    making him comfortable
    she loves him so much
    feeding him constantly
    when he opens his mouth to cry
    bathing him with affection
    she can't hardly deny
    as she wrapped him in his blanket
    she smiles at his satisfaction
    warmed by her gentle touch
    hes comfortable and nourished
    laying back......he burped
    ............as he watched TV
    then he yells in the kitchen

    Baby.....bring me a beer!


    Inspired by Cocobutterskyn's "Mammy men"


    Epiphany(c)2001
     
  2. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    o'kay...o'kay.

    you got me.
    i have to admit that my mind took me in a different direction. i could see the infant being spoiled by mommie. had to make sure i read right when i read;

    "Baby......bring me a beer!"

    nicely done, poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!!

    look at u here flowin' like dis
    i'll have a cold one myself..:D
     
  4. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Me feelin kinda bad,

    It seems I'm not reading and posting to my own Sister. I'm sowwie I'll do better. :) This was funna. :laugh:

    Madd Holiday Greetings :heart:
    CCBSKYN
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    another case of the mammy men....
     
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    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I have to agree..

    with Baller..

    I had visions of a sweet young mother holding her baby close to her breast, loving him with gentle hands...

    then...that last line just give me a whole other different pic..tell him to get his own **** beer:x:

    cute...

    K
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    A mother's love yes indeed !
     
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    you got me on this one flo on poet.:welldone:
     
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