Black Poetry : A Mother's Love: To My Lil' Girl

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  1. spicybrown

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    My dear sweet love, I prayed for your birth for years,

    gazing up at your photo, my burning eyes fill with tears,

    remembering back to when you were born on the winter Solstice, of 1997,

    doctors placed you in my arms, conehead and all, a gift from heaven,

    the 5 hour crying,:baby: stanky diapers and all, **** was that off the hook,

    post-partum baby blues:cry: , sleepless nights, i found relief in a Bell Hooks book,

    now i'm glad to see you'll be entering a new life cycle in December,

    the princess room, numerous questions, non-sharing..... I'll always remember,

    funny how your birthday and conception date coincide the awaited saviour,

    saved me from a life of selfishness, now I'm on better behavior,

    Airheads, candy necklaces, capri suns, you say they're all your favorite,

    glitzy-glittery plastic high heels, and hula hoops I also used to play with,

    my pretty little chocolate morsel, laughing as i spin you through the air,

    glad mommy stayed home to bond with you, nothing else could compare,

    you inspire yo crazy ol' mommy to aim for higher heights,

    knowing you fall asleep with a bellyfull helps me sleep better at night,

    the day you birth your seed makes me strive to stay alive,

    keep up the good work, stay in school,You Go Girl, give mommy a ^5



    :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :angel1: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar:


    :tongue3: :birthday::tongue3:
     
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    so beautiful and warm the love of mommy!
    aweeeeeeeee so cute ....made me smile wide.
     
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    Beautiful Poet
    What a wonderful piece
    Poet of the week
     
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    that was tight you don't hear most mothers looking back at the bad and taking as good. nice drop.
     
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    Thank You all for the support, I wish the same sunshiny memories to the fathers, and fathers-to-be. Luv Ya:spinstar:
     
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    Hi spicy
    Oh this is so precious
    You can't help but feel the
    love in this flow
    I was just a smiling a mile wide
    as i read and felt more of your poem
    Yes yes yes
    Beautiful :)

    Peace
     
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    aint nothing like motherhood huh?
     
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    This was so warm and endearing, your work has a genuine quality that I really enjoy. There's nothing like a mother's love.
     
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    beautiful beautiful beautiful..................
     
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    there's nothing like the inner warmth WE get...

    ...as parents, when our hearts fill with pride for our children. BEAUTIFULLY DONE.
     
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