Black Poetry : A "MONETARY" embrace

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  1. PoeticManifesta

    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hes my cocoa latte..
    comes out steaming hot..
    but brought to a cool chill...
    as he melts my ice cubes..
    and I count my bills.

    My mouth sighs,
    as his coolness embraces
    my warm.. upper lip
    taste buds
    are tantalized as this tasty treat
    tickles them in extacy

    He sends shivers down my spine,
    as my brain shuts down,
    and my heart starts triage,
    trying to find out which part
    has not been shocked
    by all that is he.

    Electrodes fire..
    sending current across my synapse..
    thru my petuitary gland..
    and whoosh..
    Im wet.
    *smile*
    Sweat..
    Im covered in sweat..
    his coolness has made me hot.
    Something hit the spot..
    as parts of me are still unable to move

    because my tastebuds are in a groove..
    feigning for another sip..
    waiting for him to cross my lips...
    setting my soul afire..
    and my brain a blitz..

    All that and I havent even seen
    him face to face...
    so i daydream..
    as I wait in line at starbucks....
    sippin my iced cocoa latte..
    ready to pay for my concoction..
    and got stuck..
    In a "monetary" embrace.

    What the heck just happened?
    :thinking:



    This is to my Hunny Money... aKa Monetary..
    he asked for it..
    seek and you shall find!
    :ilu:
     
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    Hott Drop girl. It's amazing what that Starbucks makes you think about. I'm feeln' you. I'm a Starbuck's junkie myself.:)
    Much Luv
     
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    gurl you got me sweating. carry on honeychild carry on. with your hot self. go head sit down for i's have to spank ya. no on second thought you may like it. just wanted to make you laugh which i suspect i did. flo on poetic
     
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    This was cute
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoa Money got it up to his knees now u go gurl !!!
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Poeticmanifesta.............THANK YOU, MY DEAR SISTA...

    THANK YOU so much for this beautiful peace. I love it...adore it...will cherish it. As I read it, it brought a smile upon my face as I envisioned you at the coffee shop with me as your favorite cup of java...your mental love lava...occupying space in that wonderful mind of yours. :D

    Again, thanks, young lady. :D

    :heart:

    :toast:
     
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