Black Poetry : ...a moment

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MsDLite, Feb 1, 2001.

  1. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    today when you asked me how
    i felt about you...
    for a moment...
    which seemed like an eternity
    to you...
    i was without speech
    not from the mere
    posing of the question
    but, the request to know
    what was inside of me...
    as it concerns you

    what i had to say
    was not an opinion of
    how i see you..
    man...
    operating through
    the day
    but, how you...
    a desired man...
    could operate within
    my realm
    my life's space
    ...the folds of my
    existence

    thoughts of you
    brings about a suspending
    of time in which
    i am unable to exhale
    or feel my being
    because your affect
    upon me is
    supernatural...
    yes, powerful...

    you are my...
    life...

    so as i release
    the words my heart
    and soul have stored
    i answer your question
    simply...

    i love you

    MsDLite (c) 02.01
     
  2. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    so nice to hear those words

    tell him MsDLite !

    I LOVED these lines ...

    but, how you...
    a desired man...
    could operate within
    my realm
    my life's space
    ...the folds of my
    existence

    go head gurl!

    :)
     
  3. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sweet...

    thanks MsD. for confirming thoughts of loves smiles along life's gentle roads.:)

    THIS WAS NICE.
     
  4. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love you...that's how I feel about you. Likes that alot.

    Beautiful piece MsD,

    BE
     
  5. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THE SWINGIN' MsD

    For MsDLite

    I didn't know you could sing...
    Blowing like yesterday's child
    So full of promise...
    In a waiting room world

    You sing of love
    Stars in the night
    The way you jingle
    Comes off real tight

    We've seen you play Da Universe
    Heard country bumpkins... groove your verse

    MsD, our nightingale

    Not once enraged

    The poet's Bird ~

    Jazz critics crave


    1poetsought :toast:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis be sweet music u composed a voice of love within
    keep blessing da house
     
  7. Poetic Pride

    Poetic Pride Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gurl that was beautiful...I write poetry too and I can identify talent and gifts when I see them and girl you know you have a gift! Nice Work! Please go and see my poem Sisterly Love in Poetry Get Your Flow On...or just look me up because I'm no stranger, but I'm family! :)
     
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