Black Poetry : A MOMENT

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  1. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How long is a moment supposed to be?
    It could be froma second
    to an eternity
    A moment can last a day
    or be with u always

    How long is a moment supposed to last?
    It could 4ever
    or just pass
    one moment can melt away
    like a crayon under the hot sun
    and just be done

    But I can't let this moment melt away
    not today
    cause this moment is truly special in
    our time that we share
    that I want this one moment 2 last 4ever
    If I could just....
    freeze time so that this moment that
    is intertwining us together
    could be an eternity
    Because that's all we have
    is a moment in a day
    that we cannot let sip away
    n2 this black hole of wasted events in history
    of moments that we share

    So, how long is a moment supposed to be?
    It can last a second
    to an eternity.
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Im grasped by this piece at this moment, very very poetic piece.
    Nice Drop!!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice drop......
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    moments can be as long as one's heart accepts !
    this was a deep release of meanings in life & truth
     
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    Moments are very precious ...
    It takes a moment to inhale love, a moment to ex-hale it, moments are something that surely can't be taken for granted.
    awesome piece poet, I enjoyed reading this very much
     
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    Sweet baby_face,

    U really wrote this.....
    i'm into the flow and the message....
    the moment.....
    Great job....

    Peace and Blessings
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks every1 for the love
    and a Happy Valentine's Day
    to u all.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A moment can change the course of history, a moment can be the beginning of an eternity. Loved the way you flowed with such depth poet.
     
  9. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank u all
    appreciate it so much
     
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    feelin u

    a moment can last a second or an eternity,
    due to the print made on your memory


    madly tight drop, poet
     
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