Black Poetry : A Moment

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  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A Moment

    If I could be yours for one night would you have me?

    Would you hold me like there was no tomorrow?

    Would you look into my eyes and get lost ?

    Or would you push me away because one night is not enough?

    Because you can't be satisfied with momentary possesion?

    Why can't we take our moment and let our passions ignite into a flame that

    will take away all feelings of hopelessness and guilt.

    And let our love unite us in a way that we have never been united before.

    Just take a moment and love me the way I love you.

    And need me the way I need you.

    Please just take me for that moment.
     
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    and if for that one moment
    yes we can relax into the
    beauty of that moment as i
    live inside ya eyez
    and caress u if tomorrow was
    no more for that moment
    whisper the warmth of love
    upon u and saviour it let a
    lost treasure for that moment
    we can cross into the sweet hush
    and define the moment of
    compassionate with no regrets
    let the yearning burning notions
    float in motion yes for the moment
    we can be as one
    shall we dance !

    i love this flow had to mix in it wow !!
     
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    tyte drop. i dont know what it is about ur poems, but they always hit too close to home n at the right moments.lol. much love :)
     
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    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the luv. If I am touching right at home then I think maybe it's because I am being real. I am glad that you like them. :thanks:
     
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    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes!!!!!!
    $$$ Rich$$$
    Thanks for appreciating and you know that your flow just sets mine in motion.

    Smooches!!!
     
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    indeed likewise sistah Queen
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was wonderful, you really captured that hope for that special moment, thatgirl. Nice flow also rich. Hmmmm, do I sense a collab in the making? Sounds like a plan.
     
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    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the feedback. A collab with Mr. Fire himself???? Wow Iwould be beyond honored.
     
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