Black Poetry : a moment in time

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  1. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i come into the room
    you are lying on your stomach
    watching tv
    i lie on your back
    lift your t-shirt
    kiss your pretty dark skin
    i say hey
    what's your schedule looking like today?
    you smile and say you have some time for me
    i lock the door and say
    let's be quiet
    the boys are in their room watching tv
    and just for that moment in time
    you are totally mine
    you are connected and as one with me
    i don't even hear the tv
    but i feel as though i am the most beautiful woman in the world
    and all of my dark thoughts dissipate
    your pure heart and good soul becomes a part of me
    gives me the renewal to think with a clear head
    so now i leave you relaxing on the bed
    i go to take a shower
    i switch my radio to play the sounds of the ocean
    i wash my hair with motions
    i wash my body with grapefruit body scrub
    i come out totally relaxed and renewed
    i look in the mirror
    and i feel blessed, i feel beautiful
    i wish that i could bottle this moment in time
    and wear it as a fragrance
    it is the way you love me and protect me
    it is my love for you
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    An effervescent moment in time... captured brilliantly!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o'yessssssss Red this was a moment captured perfectly
    and sweetly just the two .......love it
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh i love this..a very perfect moment...much love
    wooooooweeeeeee..love it
     
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