Black Poetry : a moment away (inspired by Wil)

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  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    once—
    an aspiration divine
    now—
    a dream realized

    (& in no tyme)

    he has—
    stolen my heartbeat
    caressed my chi
    & french kissed
    every
    assiduous instant
    with recollections of
    sheer bl(his)sfulness

    & I am only…
    …a moment away…

    from telling him that
    each tyme that I –

    …look in his eyes
    hear his name…
    …see his smile

    (all the while)

    I am only…
    …a moment away
    from…
    falling in love.



    © SunShyneOrygynals 2001, all rights reserved
     
  2. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tOO cLEAN

    THIS IS SO TIGHT .....I GOTTA KEEP READING IT ...AND EVERY TIME I READ IT...I SEE MORE....CLASSIC GA. CLASSIC !!

    On A Continuous Journey
    GYPSYMAN
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You my dear ~

    are lovely when you shyne!

    Love the flow of it all sista!!
     
  4. alyce

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    I must second

    these emotions, Sunshyne lady! This is tender~sweet, and drippin with so much juicy love from that pen of yours, chile!

    Oh yeah! :)

    Flow!

    a
     
  5. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like!
    This scribe is as tight as a brand new weave

    Thanks
     
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :toast: muss be nyce to be wil...I told you already that this heah is overall CLEAN!!!

    did i tell u that u r brilliant today?

    yourwritingisdenseforestandidon'tmindbeinglost...

    sean.
     
  7. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    G-Man. thank you for being the 1st to grace this piece!

    N2. Ms A. my sisters!... YOU inspire my shyne. (no lie) :)

    Shaz. what you know 'bout weave?! (lol) thanks sweetie!

    Seany!. My Muse! Wil can't hold a candle to You! & yes you have told me today that i am brilliant... (among other thangs! :wink: )
     
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    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sunshyne

    i'm feelin
    Green with envy
    Absolutely :heart: this gyrl!!

    My turn's comin...I know it!
    as the wait becomes more difficult, the closer He's getting to me!!!!!
    The :heart: of my life!!
     
  9. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awwww

    This is so touching. I can totally relate. I am truly diggin this.....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WOW! SUNSHYNE :love:

    YA CAN LOVE ME ANYTYME
     
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