Black Poetry : A Misconception

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by howardtsu, Aug 18, 2007.

  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a dog was barking at me one day

    and it startled me when i was parking my bicycle so i stopped to say :

    have you seen my soulmate?

    the last time i saw her she was headed to Colgate university

    and i haven't seen her since

    the Doberman winced

    ouch!!!

    that's got to be difficult knowing that her fence

    could be surrounding somebody else's back yard

    i thought you were her prince

    it was obvious that the doberman was in no mood to mince words

    and Howard was convinced that his bite would be much worse than his adverbs

    the suspense was filling him with thoughts

    of Eve's incense of how he caught her offgaurd

    when he suddenly proposed to her before she regained her senses and told him

    that it wouldn't be a little absurd

    to hear him out even though she already has a San Antonio Spur

    swishing her nets but at least maybe a friendship could occur

    do you have any pets?

    but at that moment howard's thoughts were inturrupetd by the train of regrets

    that traveled the tracks of his mind

    every since Eve left him behind

    he wanted her back so bad, how could fate be so unkind

    by allowing him to find his one and only

    only to be left sad and lonely .......


    seeing how bereft his questions had left Howard

    the doberman figured that maybe this wasn't the best hour .......

    eve :

    Howard!!!!!!!!

    doberman :

    what was that delicious sound?


    Howard and the doberman quickly turned around

    and saw the prettiest smile ever born

    in any Ringling Bros. circus

    and it was that morn' that howard realized that maybe his life had purpose

    after all




    love,

    eve & howard
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I enjoyed the word play and creativity here howard.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was one sweet spin love da flow here
     
  4. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks watzinaname

    thanks $$rich$$
     
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