Black Poetry : A message to tha Ladies

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  1. intangible

    intangible New Member MEMBER

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    Ladies you kno that..
    tha phenominal never asked the secret question truly recognizing where your beauty came from..
    to me, itz like goin to the parker brotherz an askin them where they got their game from..plain dumb...
    i, instead admire what is manifested before me giving a blessing to my eyes..
    the weak, petty insecure, and obscure will always see strength an beauty as something for them to despise...
    i speak of the phenominal woman in a manner befitting a queen..
    royalty with skin so soft, and skin aglow like afro sheen...
    the mental to be able to delegate who is blessed with her presence..
    an the respect of self to acknowledge what to accept, because all presents from one's suggestive presence is indeed not a true present...
    she has integrity, pride, determination, and a longing to please..
    her mate, who in himself must be PHENOMINAL and desiring to meet her needs...
    from the pulling out of the chair, to the holding the door..
    chivalry isnt dead..just peep my mind..because there's much more to explore...
    traverse inside these portals an indeed do stay awhile..
    PHENOMINAL MAN TO PHENOMINAL WO-MAN I WAS CONCEIVED AS A MAN-CHILD...
    i was as a raisin in the sun with a beautiful mind but no identity..
    raised from strange fruit and offered nothing but despise and mimicry...
    i stand strong like the ROCK OF GIBRALTAR AN REFUSE TO EVER FALTER...
    I BELIEVE IN AFFIRMATIVE ACTION AN BEING MORE THAN JUST A TALKER...
    I AM PHENOMINAL
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave: welcome to destee....:wave:
    this was a wonderful flow....
    enjoy and share more...:angel1:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What a great tribute to the ladies, I thank you for creating this verse. Welcome to destee!! hope to hear more form you!!
     
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    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WELCOME,
    that was a :bomb: joint, feelin this, hope to hear more!
    GOD BLESS :angel1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome within this was on point and tyte
    happy u here upon us scribing and to da ladies
     
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